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(Removed for KU) TtOW! - Chapter 150 - Designation Discussions

🕑 Added 2023-04-28 20:34:13 +0000 UTC

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luda305

So sappy 😭

Kasper Lynderup Jensen

What is a light blade spell if not a laser sword?

AEgamer1

Her lasers ended up as a Mana Beam skill which she can use and combine with magic if she so chooses. It's just that between multicasting, spell fusion, and strategic magic that casting magic directly has become the more convenient and scalable option for her.

Rainer

When I read, I make all these changes in my head regardless. I figure I might as well make the suggestions as I read if I can. But Patreon isn't really supportive of that. Royal Road and Googledocs work very well in that endeavor.

Rainer

Yeah, continuity errors, or blatant, "something is missing here" errors, I'll mention. But all the minor stuff, like word choice, punctuation, or spelling errors I'll ignore. I edit non-professionally for another author, and I've had my hand in a few other pies before as well. In return, I get to read their chapters before they release to the public. 😀

Xorvivs

Laser sounds nice. I did forget it for long: in Chapter 1 Seero fought with a laser beam against the slimes. Before she got her way with magics. Later she only used missiles and her projectile-weapons in non magic attacks. Whats up with her laser vs. light magic? Is it possible to fuse them?

AEgamer1

Oops again I forgot to finish an edit lol. Or maybe...Taog won't get power creeped after all?

Rainer

OK, you have Toag in 2 places at once. First, you have him sitting around the fire with Ateia, second, you have him returning from a hunt with Seero.

Wensber

Thanks for the chapter!


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