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Chapter 66: It’s as If He Doesn’t Want to Go Home

🕑 Added 2022-02-03 08:01:00 +0000 UTC

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tibbish

Yeah it's ridiculous, lots more justification and fleshing out is needed here to make it work

Neferyti

Agreed. The crown prince has been looking over her shoulder the whole time with academics from the college and other schools looking over her expenditures and usage of resources. To pull this after the fact will make it blatant to everyone involved that this is targeted.

Hoooo, Hi, well back to the main story finaly. That's a very good cliffhanger (don't abuse them please). First thank you for this great story. Now, i have the same opinion than mightguyishot. You need to develop the "gaming" plot. Or his this a plot to ruin the Guevera house and make 1 of the 4 kingdom house fall ? The headmaster doesn't supervise the student projects ? Who decide of them ? We need more informations and see the antagonist side (alessa and co or other faction) and were they want to go. Another question : How the Guevera house are going to react politically at this ? Because actually they have Tori that colonise and create a small city on the royal land with zero benefit for them. And that's a direct attack to they're economy, power and independance from the royal family. Why and who target Tori and her family with this ? And how the royal family gonna act now ?

Jacob Armstrong

I would also like to chat on a discord. Could you fob off the mod responsibility to some volunteers or something? I understand if it's too much effort though, I'm just another happy reader who would like to see more discussions in between chapters to get my fix.

Julkur

I know of some Discord channels where the author made only the setup and nothing else. But I admit that I have no idea how much work that is. Would be nice anyway 🥺🙏

Yeah, showing her do her drills and practice her form and occasionally spar would get boring. If something new or relevant happened while at practice, that would be written out.

BeepBoop

Kaching! All those exciting sounds and pretty lights! It is totally not her fault for throwing away all her money! Who would have thought that the 9th roll will be black after yhe the previous 8 was black too! The Math was perfect, the villains must have cheated!

Sorry, guys, there is no discord. I don't have the time or energy to moderate.

Now I'm imagining them in a casino setting....

A lot of people learn a second weapon in HEMA or sometimes move on to add grappling. I would say it's a combination of that and having some basic instruction with a dagger as Victoria (likely nothing beyond 'this is how you hold it' and 'this is where you stick it'). In an earlier chapter, she did tell Gideon & co that "they should see [her] with a dagger"; she's also sliced Montan's charm; while camping, she held the dagger in a defensive position in case of attack when it was just Alessa's group coming out of the forest, and she has chatted with Nanny Rey about her dagger skills, to which Nanny smiled and said they were good - but, those are all tiny details that mostly just hint at her ability and can be seen as intimidation or meaningless banter with Nanny. I've never actually shown it in detail and won't for a while.

I also wait to binge read (2 weeks to a month), but I know what you mean - when it's updated, you want to click. The mini-arcs will be over in 2-4 chapters, though!

She will make a call~ And no discord; I just don't have the time to moderate it.

Lou Gar

I think I remember her telling Ewan in the early chapters to tuck in his elbows, if he didn't want to get them cut off, and the other students started copying that. They watched, but were to afraid of her to ask directly. Later, when "Fabio" challenged her, she was in the training grounds helping anther student (evidently they worked up their nerve to finally ask her). So, she was training, and practicing. It was just not played up. I'm guess that it was not, because it was not worth mentioning, or there was not a story-worthy reason to mention it. Whichever...

Sekander

Alternatively depending on how the budget limitation is implemented she maybe be able to write of investments from outside her family as not being part of her budget. After all what can she do if Piers or Axton or the other nobles want to develop some real estates there ^^

Nikola

Well, Tori is going to be an absolute nightmare with the sword. Right now she has 15 years of experience with it, it just that her current body doesn't have the strength or muscles memory to bring all that skill to bare. She has an incredible advantage and if she keep sparing with Edwn who is being trained by some of the top swordsmen, yeah she going to be monstrous. Fabian is probably going to be distracted by Allisa and somehow still blame Tori for his lack of skill and/improvement. As for the budget cap I can see that being called off or changed. There are too many people watching the Delta along with other students projects connected to it for the budget restrictions to stick, that's not even counting the university staff and investors. On top of that it will endanger the lives of the villagers, Tori seem to be far more willing to ask for help and use her connections especially when it's to help others. I can see her taking a lower grade or out right failing her project then sticking to a budget that can harm the Delta.

Brian P.

Yeah, a bit emphatic for my taste but not wrong.

Sdff

it has also been stated i forget where, Character 1, " now that youve defeated x theirs nowone who you can spar against thats your equal tori". Tori says something like, "thats ok ill just go through some exersises". character three thinks, " her movements were mesmerizing like a dance and struck shivwrs at my heart"

mightguyishot

At this point it's not even a high schoolers petty fight. People with REAL JOBS and REAL RESPONSIBILITIES are causing erriversible ECONOMIC damage and costing LIVES! People need to be held responsible for this. someone needs to be fired. Starting with that headmaster.

Radosty

It was mentioned quite a few times in the first year how she spend time on practice grounds, e.g. the cheating scandal, her getting first after opening the shop, Fabian knowing to find her there for a duel, adding the info the local sword master helping her train. Additional it was mentioned that she was even training while the slap-punishment as well as her beeing quite close to a lot of the association members. And I think it's good to avoid repetitive mentions of the training sessions since that would become boring.

Sunless

I think her going to the sword club implies that she is training there

Max Lopo

Sorry, but he has a point. As I have said, the "magic narrative" has clearly only power over the "main protagonists" and the licèe. This is pissing out of the toilet. I don't care if the headmaster is "brainwashed". At the end of the day he is an EMPLOYEE. Since reason doesn't work (spoiler spoiler), DO AS YOU ARE TOLD or go into forced retirement. We are beyond stretching the credibility now.

nugitoBambino

I... don't know about an overthrowing the royals plotline. But I agree this is too big of a deal for a school to truly stop. At worst I can see Tori just throwing up a middle finger an taking an L on the grade for the project. She'll be pissed - and maybe not get to University - but there's *no* way she stops investig in the delta now

Drew Kerstens

Tori talking about never seeing someone train with swords, I may have missed mentions of it but I’ve hardly seen her train either. For someone in her past life who was so passionate about it and who is still good at it I find it a little strange she isn’t constantly putting training time into her busy schedule.

WhyNot42

Wow - what a cliff! Thanks for an awesome story, can’t wait to see the next chapter!!!

mightguyishot

IF SHE DOESNT CALL HER PARENTS OR ASK FOR HELP! WITHIN 3-4 BUSINESS DAYS??? IM QUITTING THIS STORY RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW. I'm sorry but "the mysterious game is mind controlling" is weak at this point and shouldn't even impact anyone besides main characters. THE AUTHOR CANNOT CONTINUE GIVING US UNREALISTIC CONFLICT WITH NO LOGIC WITHOUT A FUCKING ANTAGONIST!!!!. I NEED NAMES! I NEED (HOW, WHAT, WHEN, WHERE, WHY) EXPLAINED N I NEEDED IT YESTERDAY!

Nobody

I'm going to guess this is going to be about Alessa spending the entire combined fortunes of the imposter Alvere, her merchant "friend", and her own specifically to block others from getting resources and gambling. But the game is interfering again so the real reasons she's out of money are being conveniently ignored.

Sunless

Ok if she does not immediately call her parents this becomes ridiculous. For all intents and purposes, this is an organized attack on her family. You can argue that it is the game doing voodood mind magic all you want but that does not change that this is a targeted campaign against her family (more proof can be fond in how the game series systematically kills all her family according to the wiki ) The family needs to have an investigation about what is going on in the school because if that policy is not blatantly targeting them I don't know what is. And let's say Toris theory that there is a game affecting the world is false, then they need to start looking into this stuff. Maybe it's Gideon who is dropping hints about how unfair what Tori is doing and the staff take their ques from him thinking it is the stance of the imperial family Maybe it's something more sinister, perhaps related to the baby Tori kidnaping and whatever has happened at a succession ceremony to tighten the security so that the price got arrested on suspicion of being an imposter This is way to serious to just chuck out to it's game logic I can deal with this. She is 40 for crying out loud she should know better and ask for help

Brian P.

I thought the focus was on him not wanting to go home. But yeah, he seems the most likely to attempt serious harm against Tori or her friends. She’s really got to get on those anti-charm crystals.

Tjark

You know with the whole budget limit, the conversation on the Duke Alvere's son was a little lost. I wonder how him being a shit roommate will come back later. Him 'glaring like he's going to kill Gabe in his sleep' and yelling when Gabe cleans up, reminds me of when he threatened Tori's life if she doesn't keep away from poor Alessa. Maybe that will escalte at some point.

Tjark

I was wondering about that too.

Sdff

Their's also the matter of national security with what appears to be the nations largest magical cristal researve in a half built swamp. And said magical crystals ability to explode or madically curse the nation if left unprotected/undeveloped. In the Games one or more of the plots involved magical curses that engulfed the capital or whole nation... So I'm not exactly sure how any well read noble, let alone the Emperer and Empress, would let Tori's Lycee project go underfunded, poorly completed, or left uncompleted. This whole thing almost smells like secret plotter trying to overthrow the Current Emperor/Empress. Maybe the Evil Duke/StepDutchess are actually behind the Gidian/LadyHart plot. And the Final show Down will be a Siege on the Dutchy and a Grieving Daddy Hart.

Julkur

Is there a Discord channel for this story?

Radosty

I actually expect her to fight the restriction head on because the villagers are affected. She only seem to hold back if nobody else is affected.

Julkur

Someone higher in status than the Headmaster but lower than the Empress? *tata tata ta-tah*(trumpets) It's time for Prince Charming to save our dear Tori. Piers, go fetch your white horse!

Different Nick

Can she afford to annul the contract? She needs bricks for buildings, and there might be some penalties for canceling.

Radosty

It could be the reason why it is brought up, but it's just too targeted. The limit is so high that is doesn't help anyone with low funds to begin with. I am still convinced that it is an attack on her reputation mostly. But I don't think the limitation will stand. The plots in the game were easy to counter after all.

Tjark

Damn it, I need moaaar! This is too good for its own sake.

Max Lopo

Hello? Gideons parents? Yeah.... He and the Licèe are interfering with the resettling of nearly 2000 refugees. Pretty sure this is the kind of thing that is a MATTER OF THE STATE. Problem solved. This is Petty. And targeted. If Gideon throws around an authority he doesn't actually have, maybe it is time to use some of the real one. Even if there is some kind of magical narrative, it appears that the only ones affected are the "main characters" and the Licèe staff, namely the headmaster. Just go over their heads.

Radosty

I agree it's left rather unclear. I'm either rolling with plain intimidation tactic or a sudden headache/memory dump while on a training session with nanny Rey.

BeepBoop

"It was very unlikely that a student would spend more than what they and their family could afford in the three and a half years the project was worked on." Unless, you know, the student gambles away their fathers money. Then goes crying how it is unfair that she has to do penny-less the project, while the evil villianess can go around "throwing money to the project"

Brian P.

Gideon's mom would have some heavy words with her if he intentionally antagonized Tori that way. I'm inclined to believe the theory above that it's Alessa's poor decisions that brought this on, but I also think the story absolutely needs more in-world justification than another decree from the headmaster.

Radosty

My guess, this is Gideon's late revenge for snatching away the teachers by offering more money. I even expect some remark from him about how she shouldn't have been so irresponsible to overpay teachers so much or import bricks of all things. She will likely get a permission to spend more, fueling additional rumors about her beeing bought into Lyceé. Anyway it was said that the animosity will escalate in the second year. Props to Aila for keeping up on that. But the cliffhanger still stings, even if it allows some discussions in the comments.

Brian P.

But this doesn’t take into account the scope of a project, so it’s effectively punishing anyone handed a larger project which is itself an arbitrary and effectively unchallengable decision by the lycée. Hell, these kind of decisions should also only apply to the incoming first years, as applying this to projects currently in progress is itself an egregious example of manipulation. Really, Tori needs to go above the headmaster for this if he’s addled. Even the Empress of the nation was shocked by Tori’s project, so someone has to be in charge higher than the headmaster but lower than the ruler of the nation. I know she’ll probably give up, mope and then deal with it instead, but I feel like we need more when the restrictions keep coming from the same vague, unnamed source.

Brian P.

Okay, I was wondering about the dagger. Early on in the story Tori is exasperated that the family gives her the dagger and continues to tell her to use it. This seems to say that Tori wasn’t expecting it, and that would mean, to me, that Victoria wasn’t trained with it. Later Tori gets Ilyana training with her nanny but doesn’t participate in the training herself. So why does Tori act like she knows dagger fighting here? Is this something she learned in HEMA alongside sword fighting? Is this actually memories from Victoria that came up off screen later on? Were her parents and brothers just… okay with giving Tori a dagger without her having demonstrated any ability and having no training in the first few chapters?

Julkur

That's a good point. "the recent events have shown that students under a certain age are unable to handle bigger sums. To prevent competition with who spend the most and the following bankruptcy of the stundents' families, a limit has been put in place. Only logical

Julkur

If this is again a game induced plot to make her fail and to find a reason to kick her out before graduating, then she'll have to cancel her contract with the brick lady. And Alessa has one more reason to cry because Tori brought misery to Chetter-what-ever-shire.

Sharon Ward

Ouch what a cliff. It could be interested to see the headmasters perspective of that meeting and what their reasoning was (and if it involved a student who had recently lost a lot of money in a bet).

Julkur

Oh come on. You seriously can't end every chapter on an mini cliff 😩 How shall I concentrate on my work now? Why are you every other day crushing my plan to save some chapters to bulk read them? 😣

Oxylus

Yikes. So, First she needs to figure out what's going on from the Headmaster. Then from there she needs to utilize her connections. We can guess the reasons and background of this, but without further information she can't go outside of the school to get help. That's too much a knee jerk. Try to alleviate issues at the lowest level and elevate from there as needed. On another note, is there a discord for this??


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