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Chapter 70: Push Aiden Into the Well

🕑 Added 2022-02-11 08:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Mistress Araenidae

More like Push Prince Gideon Down the Well.

Jake Cantrell

Honestly, the only person I feel bad for here is the Empress. She is going to get in more trouble with her best friend because of her idiot son.

rgreads

"Tori, where do you get all the ideas for this bizarre fantasy world? A crystal-powered carriage pulling a whole line of wagons faster than a horse can gallop? Buildings so huge they make the streets look like flat-sided canyons? Glass mirrors that can show you anything in the reflection, and even obey spoken commands? And why is there always a cat picture on every one we find?

Calico C

I would love to see the talk between the Empress and Gideon from Gideon’s perspective. But that’s mostly because I’m excited to see which way Gideon’s character will turn, and what logic lead him there. I loved the chapter, thank you for writing.

BeepBoop

And that is a topic that deserves its own short story!

Perf

Thanks for the chapter. I love your story Alia.

Mike

Mama is awesome, love hearing about how protective she is with Tori.

Bacon Sir

Man, I almost feel bad for Gideon. Definitely had it coming, but having his whole family against him at once? Brutal.

The Lost Pages

Oops...

Kane

Both ways are correct, actually.

Teee

Very good chapter. What I liked best was Tori's idea to take the players to another world, her very own world. I can't wait to see what the others think about the crazy „game world" Tori has come up with.

BeepBoop

“You’re not seducing me....” Piers said. You are right Piers, it isn't you who are being seduced, but Ilyana!

BeepBoop

Flashback to the last similar confrontation. Or more precisely, the one we haven't gotten to see...

Radosty

I don't know but tell me if you find out, please.

abowden

I too wonder about the dungeon crawler thing, war games probably exist already, the original Dnd was an evolution of those, but this is a streamlined, optimized version, that leans into the role playing side of things (aka, what differentiates rpg's from wargames in the first place), that should be more popular than it's competition.

Gremlin

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Radosty

Did His Highness request that he *is* not *to* be mentioned as having a part in this? I'm not native but I think it should be like that. I don't want to be pushy and I love this chapter, but I still wanted to mention it.

Julkur

Where can I subscribe to Patreon Supreme Plus for the next 6 chapters?

abowden

I'm curious about that too, I hope he doesn't hate his brother or anything...

Tjark

lol beginning and end were both hilarious and the middle part very satisfying. Glad the policy was dealt with without dragging it out. Was just the right pacing imo. I'm curious to see where her dungeon crawl game will lead to. By now her whole family, her friends and axton/piers know about it. Maybe it'll be famous at some point. I remember now why Ava was one of my favorite characters during the succession arc. And why I cried during their farewell. Glad she's still being the cutest and funniest little one ever, even if only over comcry. And now I can't wait to see the shitshow between monica and antonia xD

Tjark

Well, since it was Prince Gideon that wanted them to implement the policy they probably wanted to get a favor or at least brownie points with him. The development with Piers is pretty recent so Gideon is probably still considered the more likely Crown Prince. Get a favor from the future Emperor would be very tempting, I'm sure. And going from reputation they probably weren't fond of Tori anyway. Could have blinded them from her influence.

Brian P.

I’m very disappointed Tori isn’t using opposed checks when intra-party conflicts happen.

nugitoBambino

Reading this chapter made me feel like a cat that ate a grilled and salted trout then took a nap next to a window with the sun shining down. I'm immensely satisfied.

Empty Shelf

Funny to think that Ilyana has so much pull. Like, wow. Meanwhile Gideon seems to be falling apart, and I can't help but wonder what will happen when/if he pulls himself together.

Durzo

With that ending I’m fully satisfied. It was a little annoying that Gideon only got told off by his brother (a big blow for him but not enough). Now that mother dearest is on the case I can rest easy

Oxylus

Reminds me of the old Nextel PTT phones in the US. I remember family members and people out and about having them when I was a wee lad. Hearing that 'chirp chirp' then the whole conversation was so annoying.

Lictor Magnus

It is a bit problematic that every phone call is on speaker phone. You’d think they’d have developed a more private version by now. Maybe that’ll be one of Tori projects in her crystal tower 😂

Sharon Ward

Ohh..to be a fly on the wall for that phone call

what a way to end this XD

abowden

So it's finally resolved, I can't wait to see what the fallout will be. Will she be able to convince the others to retract their bans alongside her? I still don't know what, exactly they were hoping to gain from all this, why did they think it was a good idea? Whenever I see the phrase "Push X down the well" or "Throw X down the well", I can't help but be reminded of Borat...


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