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Chapter 84: A Mask Will Not Stop This

🕑 Added 2022-03-01 08:45:13 +0000 UTC

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Lady Serin

@ Oliverthms If you don't know someone's gender. They/them is perfectly acceptable as a singular pronoun.

The Architect

Ah, got it. The mass release did take me by surprise, but I thought it was a happy accident ;)

Oliverthms

The Author posted the chapters in advance because he/she were not in a place to reliably being able to post. So every chapter was posted on the 1st and RR only 'catches up' a bit if you so will.

The Architect

I might have missed the announcement. Was there a break planned after this mass release? I saw that Royalroad was still having chapters posted.

lenkite

As mentioned in the very first chapter of the story, Tori would have been sold as a sex-slave to a [Slave Trader] if she lost the game. I don't think this was ever meant to be a [Sweet Story].

Conor lennon

would certainly explain his role in the story and I guess one of the love interests has to completely a villain with no real redeeming qualtities.

BeepBoop

If you look at it trough a foreign assets lenses, Alessa would be their ideal target. Nobel, but doesn't well of. Young and the heir to her house. And now I wonder if her dislike to her fathers love interest steams from the Cows influence...

noëlle

I mean, the tropes of this kind of romance game are basically chock full of heavy stuff when you stop and think about it. A surprisingly high number of them have some crazy background things happening like rebellions and fights for power. That said, it kinda /feels/ like a romance game in that it’s surprisingly light hearted despite the occasional dark content. Tori’s day to day life is often quite positive even with the occasional events thrown in her way (though they do seem like they are increasing). Also I think the characters have taken the story in a direction the author didn’t quite expect 😂

Tjark

'Tori will need to do real practice' Not sure if you've forgotten as it's not often mentioned directly but she probably fights with the sword at least 3 times a week at the sword association. On top of that she often participates with Rey's dagger training. Definitely not as intense as Fabian training but considering her 15 years of experience her 'light' training should be more than enough to keep up her skills and not slack. She probably won't improve much (besides dagger maybe) but then as mentioned she'll never be a full-time swordswoman.

Cymi

My conspiracy theory is that the Cow Merchant is the foreign asset. He actively try to discredit the daughter of a march, causing issues with the guilds, making connections with all the capture targets through Alessa... who he 'happened' to meet on the way to the capital where he sets up a trade business and constantly has connections... all the people he's found for the others might be the tip of an invasion/spys. Now a random is stalking Sonia.. who is the daughter of a trusted cook, and who attends casual food gatherings with the first prince. If they kill him then Gideon, who has a good image of the Cow, would be heir... set ups!!! Oh! And/or he's related to the people who kidnapped Tori as a baby and died... they used merchants....

abowden

I Mean, she's a water bender now, so that counts for something...

Radosty

im also with the crystal supported fighting option. I'm still unsure on what is possible though... boosting her physical performance with Ramos' mysterious crystal? or emulate classic fantasy spell?

Matthew Coburn

Man pointing it out like that really highlights why I like this story haha. It has light hearted moments, but underlying story has some really good quality events that Tori gets pulled into.

rgreads

For a story that is going to be (paraphrased) "a light, not too serious, inverted take on teenage high school romance game tropes, really that's all I'm writing here folks!" either Aila Aurie has a very different definition of high stakes than I do, or this story has morphed a wee bit from the original intent. Let's see, we've got potentially subverting the de facto anticipated heir to the kingdom, Chekov's Gun outright loaded and handed off to an assassin for getting too close to the other heir candidate (whose autism and paralyzing social anxiety is compounded by CSA), averted rape/murder of her roommate in original timeline, assorted death threats by schoolmates completely ready to follow through, and I'm sure I'm forgetting a few other things... But no pressure, Tori!

nugitoBambino

dual-wielding dagger and crystal. That's gonna be sweet!

Enkelados

I don't think that's the best use of her time. She won't ever be better than a swordman who's entire life is focused on fighting, long term. She said it herself she's disadvantaged against bigger opponents, that won't ever change. She would be better served to have a bodyguard, and focus on alternative means, aka crystals.

Enkelados

I would guess he left the federation for private reasons, as being Fabians tutor would expose him. On the other hand it's a rare opportunity to come close to the prince's body guard, so maybe he would take the chance.

Brian P.

I think she needs to up her game with crystal tech. She’s not interested in tournaments, she wants to win in real fights.

Deepal

Fabian improved. Tori will need to do real practice.

Matthew Coburn

Oh no is this all the updates until author is back... what have i done, these wait is gonna be rough.

abowden

I knew he was shady. Foreign Asset makes sense, but it wasn't my first, even second guess. I wonder if he's still tight with his former government... Tori still won though, even if it was a more even fight, which I like. I really hope she continues to practice.


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