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Chapter 87: Let Us Make a Gentleman's Wager

🕑 Added 2022-03-17 05:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Diego Rossi

We see the events from Tori and crew side, so it easy to empathize and we see only small snippets from Alissa and crew side, so it is easy to be against them. I agree with what you have written about them. We know nothing about Cow Man, so we can't say what motivates him and under what information or misinformation he operate, still the little show time he had put him in a very bad light. The other two that I find really hard to digest are Alissa, that seems very spoiled and incapable to evaluate what she does, and her commoner friend. He his the cause of all his problems, and without any reason, as far as we know. Apparently he hadn't even spoken with Alissa before "avenging" her honor trying to damage Lions Gate merchandise.

Hey, you are in Mark of the Fool, too! :)

Thanks! I will reword this!

This is what Tori's mom had to live with for four years. To most non-military people present aside from Tori's usual crew and family, the imperial couple was pretending to be Piers' and Gideon's aunt and uncle. The other guests assumed they were related and important in some way, as they still got to sit at the same table. Villagers who work and help with the event also only recognize Piers and maybe Gideon from their previous visits.

Jacob Armstrong

Given the context of the rest of that section was about them sharing food so they could all try everyone's food, I'd imagine it was meant to say that they each ordered different seafood dishes. I do see where your confusion is coming from though and I think it could be cleared up in an edit pass.

saganatsu

"They each ordered a specific seafood dish to try to give Henrik’s chefs experience and sat around chatting." is this supposed to be each ordering a different dish, for the chefs experience, or them all ordering the same dish. "a specific seafood dish" makes it sound like they ordered the same thing.

Morgan

To my understanding the majority of each of her friends families are there, not to mention all of the servers Henrick has hired. Hopefully neither groups have someone among them who have been paid off, but i do believe there to be a chance

Lady Serin

I mean to romantic brained people, this looks super romantic. To Tori this is a systematically planned event to achieve maximum guest engagement/enjoyment. She cares for and (Platonic Loves) Piers and takes care of him and his disability. I love (not romantically) Aila for how well they write and make me feel reading their writing.

Brian P.

I get the sympathy for Gideon, but at the same time I absolutely favor Tori and her crew not being the ones to "redeem" him. He led a year-long smear and harassment campaign against Tori and the last POV we had didn't show him changing his judgemental ways around her, just him being worried about Piers' reaction to his actions.

White Neko Knight

Even Alyssa seems like she could be saved if there wasn't an outside force pushing her against Tori. It does make one wonder how fate, or what ever is causing the conflict, will handle this route.

Brian P.

Of the people at that party who, exactly, are they supposed to be fooling? The emperor's uncle and aunt? The crystal master familiar with the royal family? The marquess' daughter who helped plan the whole thing? The grandmother who chats with them about what she had for dinner? The palace cook who has served them food? The Guild Master who has undoubtedly met them? They got out of the palace without the majority of people noticing. If they also get back into the palace without those in the capital knowing, that's basically all they wanted. They were never going to suppress that this visit happened after the fact.

Morgan

"I want another slice of my son’s cake!” the Empress said, her eyes still moist". Whoops! So much for anonymity

Zyikic

Well I enjoyed reading your comment, so don't feel to bad about rambling. :)

Summercat

Pierce is smitten. Everyone knows it but those two. Tori might suspect but I think she's underestimated exactly what she means to Piers. Piers... I suspect might know, actually. But he also knows that Tori doesn't feel the same way. That Tori is not his. That Tori sees Pierce as a dear friend - that he gets the same thoughtful consideration she gives her other friends. That Tori doesn't have any romantic feelings for him. But, in that same Piers way he approaches everything, he seems fine with that. He loves Tori exactly as she is, a whirlwind that comes and goes. She'll leave one day, but she'll also return. So he's fine with that. One does not leash a whirlwind and keep it in place, lest it falls apart and dies. Moving on to another topic, I'm starting to feel sad for Gideon. Not in a "they are wronging him" sort of way, but in the little bits and pieces here and there where he gets rebuffed or blocked. Deservedly, his past behavior earned him that, but we see what he might have been had The Game and Alyssa not sunk into him - and if Zisos could be freed, perhaps all the harem targets could. Honestly the only one that I've yet to see any redeeming features in is the Cow Man. Fabian is a bullheaded hothouse flower who needs to get some training, but he's got grit and is willing to learn. He just doesn't appear to have realized how protected he was. Gunthry is savy and smart, a people person, and it's when Alyssa or the plot gets involved that we see him go haywire. When he was told he couldn't bring Alyssa to the store opening, I got the impression he was slightly confused at his own refusal. Montan... Man. That kid has a fucked home life. His father is a foolish dick, although it appears his brain has been scrambled by his wife. His mom is shady as fuck. Where does she keep getting the money to hand her son? Even so, he seems oddly practical for his situation, and I wonder how much he actually dislikes Axton. But Adrian, Cow Man? We've seen him cause nothing but trouble. We've also not gotten any sort of pov with him, and honestly little screentime (as opposed to Fabian who we also haven't had a pov with iirc). If he was the connection for Fabian's master, that raises more questions. Er. I seem to have meandered. I'll finish this off here :3

rgreads

>Piers knit his brows together. “But you’ll lose.” /r/WallStreetBets likes to joke about it, but this is what peak weaponized autism looks like!

nugitoBambino

This entire chapter brought a smile to my face!

isaiah

Definitely not romantic

abowden

The first part of this chapter literally had me wheezing. It's been a while since that happened... So Fireworks don't exist here, huh? I guess that makes another 'invention' of hers lol. I guess it's okay, her actual inventions are all arguably more useful than her 'inventions'.


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