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Chapter 172: I'm Sorry I'm Late

🕑 Added 2022-10-18 05:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Copy editing notes: 1) s/one raining knight/one raining night/ 2) I'd suggest starting the first sentence of the first paragraph with 'Axton' not 'He', to provide context to the reader.

Linus

Bit confused. Who is Illyana chained to in the end? Thought it was Tori but apparently not.

Liam K

... I want a self-propelled lazy river water hammock with a sunshade and a cup holder for my drinks plz

Nobody

It's not so much that they're disagreeing as it's been told by 3 different people who emphasized or saw different parts of it.

Tarmandan

Yes, this should be the third time I believe. The first was Tori just getting a very abridged story, the second time was Tori getting a more detailed version and this is the first time we got the more or less full story through Axton pov. They are consistent, just filling out more details

Cymi

I'm so relieved for Montan. And I loved the cuteness with the water hammocks

Empty Shelf

This was a nice chapter, but am I wrong in thinking this is the third different story of what happened to Axton's mother? The order of events and the circumstances behind her death don't seem consistent.


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