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Chapter 34: A Bit Too Smooth

🕑 Added 2021-11-30 08:00:03 +0000 UTC

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costochondritis

Tori should get written documentation that Alvere duchy are refusing to claim ownership and therefore responsibility for the delta if she builds venice there later on.

NFH

The characters are suppose to be likeable. I’m sure the others could be somewhat likeable as well if the plot wasn’t set against her, some would probably still suck.

Banks 94

Those girl npcs from the expedition thought that Alyssa was cool and “not like other noble girls”. I agree that she doesn’t seem to have any close girl friends but those girls opinions might be the general consensus of what other girls think of her. At least at that time. A lot has changed for Tori’s rep at least and some people might see Alyssa in a worse light based off of what happened with the vests and other events (if people can see her involvement through the guys “protecting” her). Also I think the “protagonists” ironically treat the “npc’s” more like npc’s then Tori does and that might help her down the road.

Broccoli

Also, I really like that he knew when to be serious, and he made things clear with Tori that romance isn’t on the table at all—since he knew that was something that made her uncomfortable (appreciated he respected her boundaries to this degree). I really do enjoy their chemistry, so I could see myself shipping them when they’re older. Piers has his eye on her it seems like, but I think he has a strong rival here in the future haha

Broccoli

Same! Hope we keep getting to see more of him. I’ve really enjoyed their interactions (Tori and Constantine). I still remember that Tupac quote 🤣

Piers said something that implies that Gideon is already just kind of Like That, but your correct in that Adrien is making casually making enemies he really doesn't need to. That's pretty dumb for someone who is supposed to be such a clever businessman. Plus the love interests are like 14-15, so I can actually see them being that dumb over a girl, especially one who has the 'Cool Girl' energy. We haven't seen Alessa have a consistent friendship with another girl so she probably has that 'not like other girls' vibe that young teen boys loose their marbles over.

Conor lennon

Either that or the more romance points alessa has with a person they go a bit insane and become obsessed with her. Like some don't even have a grip on reality.

Mecanimus

I support a few other authors. Got to spread the love.

I'm starting to really like Constantine. I'm surprised just how much I like him. Can't wait to see how things go.

Louisthau

Hello there Ari. Or is it Bibiane ? Fancy seeing you here :)

It didn't sound like people are very happy with the Alvere duchy right now so I can see Piers not necessarily wanting to pad their holdings

Broccoli

Ahhh I was thinking smaller not bigger! I could see Countess actually depending how things go.

MrrC

Taking bets. Even odds that she gets rewarded the land as some form of holding and the Alvere guy then insists that she "stole" it from him and now that becomes a conflict. I also love the "not a baron" point...Countess maybe?

Starting to wonder if Constantine was like the bulk of the harem's comment sense and restraint in canon.

Broccoli

The programming seems to be broken. Wonder what would happen if she tries to meet the second set of university capture targets early like she did with Constantine? That’s if she remembers their names in the Wiki. It would probably be worth it now that she has an inkling that it worked with Constantine.

Broccoli

😂 yesssss

lenkite

[Capture Target Acquired]. [Level Up!]

Summercat

Mwhahaha

Mecanimus

This will make a fine addition to her collection.

Sharon Ward

Thanks for the chapter


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