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Chapter 53: As If The Woman Had Escaped

🕑 Added 2022-01-14 08:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Amit Gupta

I do think that was just Tori making conversation and not exactly an explaination.

Amit Gupta

Uhh..I don't think most people agree with you. Teenage romances are a bit obsessive by default. Axton pretty much considers her a sister so I don't think there should be a romance shoehorned in there outta nowhere. (Also, Axton and Piers are the same age, if you have a problem with Piers-Tori age gap, you should have an issue with Axton-Tori as well). I myself don't have an issue as it averages out (40 yr old project manager soul, 15 yr old body. The only thing I'd like improved would be Tori's obliviousness to everything regarding Piers. It's kinda stretching the realm of credulity. I'd like to see her take a more mature stand, befitting a 40 year old project manager.

Deepal

Yes, friendship to romance with Piers, it guarantees her future.

mightguyishot

I'm not a fan with melding parents, especially ones like the Empress. Also, it's really superficial of her to be this extra, in the guise of "your my friends dsughter" when in reality she wasn't giving that energy before Tori was useful. Her actions come off insincere and motivated by personal means. Honestly everyone (including pierce) only sees her as "not like other girls" . All everyone talks about Tori is in a superficial way except her friends and family. Also pierce is getting too obsessive and is not respecting Toris boundaries for a while. He knows Tori is not interested but he's ignoring that and prioritizing his own feelings over Tori comfort. He's also ignoring Toris warning on her discomfort on their age gap n pushing for this romantic agenda while exploiting her kindness. It's icky n I hope he's not the love interest. THey DO NOT have chemistry. Every interaction between them has been pierce needing something from her. unless he's throwing his parents money around. THeir relationship dynamic is more (pseudo mom/ therapist and codependency) and very one-sided emotionally. THE ONLY male interest who doesn't want ANYTHING from her n prioritizes her needs is Axton. Which is sad. :/ because he's sibling zoned. I hate to say it but the only person Tori vibes with and has chemistry with her is her female best friend. She genuinely stuck by her before she was successful n gave her the benefit of the doubt. She cares about Tori the person. Not Tori the celebrity. And their cute together. But alas, were gonna have to endure pierce ship and watch I'm him try to fumble around and winning her time n attention like it's a prize. Or pass off his codependency for romance :(

Broccoli

At this rate this is going, I feel like we are moving to an engagement with just friendship (romance later?). Otherwise, I could maybe seeing her telling Piers about being reincarnated at some point, which would be a valid explanation on why she isn’t comfortable dating at the moment

Broccoli

That is actually so true! Alessa just danced with two guys and apparently with Dumbitri multiple times—so it’s interesting that she has the wherewithal to say that. And yeah, the Empress’ antics had me smiling too

MrrC

And provides immunity to Alyssa and her two idiotic followers

Broccoli

And Piers getting so worked up after hearing about Tori is pretty cute, but that’s probably because I’m shipping them hard. These chapters have been giving me life

Broccoli

Yes I’m loving all this drama! It’s been executed so well

MrrC

I think her bias is driven by his own obvious nonverbal cues. The Pope's son actually asked questions and responded logically. Dimitri is reacting emotionally and disgusted when they have had exactly 3 interactions I believe. 1- His assistance in blunting rumours of her cheating;. 2 His ask of her to give her designs to Alyssa and; 3 Being asked by his mom to safeguard her on the street. The meeting at the Alyssa's house and the dance already showed that both have a real bias and as such - there is no grey area. They are hostile and she is hostile in return.

Faiir

At this point, who can blame her?

The whole conversation between Piers and Tori was cute, funny, and a little sad. Sad because it's clear Piers is a bit insecure about their relationship. Though it's great that Tori tries to make him comfortable. I'm looking forward to seeing them dance together. The Empress was hilarious, escaping from her attendants. I wonder if she's going to plot anything. Alessa trying to imply Tori was a ho when she was literally off with two guys. I don't even know why there aren't rumors about Alessa running around if just one dance with Dimitri could stir up trouble for Tori. Hmm, so the perspective from Tori with Dimitri made me realize Tori is a bit bias as well. She has good reason to be but she assumes the worst without letting Dimitri speak. Hmmmm

Will C

I know she has reservations about romance, however stronger ties too the first Prince and the Empress are a good way to avoid the headsman.

lenkite

She should have simply said "Yes. Thank you" to the last question. There was no need to elucidate anything.

Matthew Coburn

I think this is my favourite story right now.... so happy you are back to regular releases! I need to see all the juicy fallout from current events

Will C

Oh dear Tori should have trusted her instincts and not forewarned the empress.

S. Nutter

I can already picture the predatory look of curiosity in the eyes of the Empress.

Summercat

Oh no This is just going to add fuel to the fire that Piers and Tori are already a couple. And... Wow. Okay So. How many people are willing to go outside their comfort zone to do a thing they dislike, just because a friend likes it? Seriously out of comfort zone, if you prefer quiet small gatherings and you're going to a full fancy ball. This is getting to some serious "Does Piers realize what this looks like, or does he simply not care" territory, or is it "We said we're just friends, why doesn't anyone believe it," He says of one of the tiny handful of people (I think maybe a total of 2?) who can touch Piers and Piers be okay with it. And Piers' family has noticed. I'm wondering what the Empress is going to say about Gideon, to Gideon, about everything she's been told. And yeah. That last paragraph. Tori is doomed. Piers is doomed. In a good wholesome way.


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