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Chapter 188: Old Man Prince

🕑 Added 2022-11-24 06:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Diego Rossi

Gideon looked impressed. “What do I like?” -> shuldn't be “What I don't like?”

dat guy

typo/word choice: "the guidance your heard needs" . "heart", "herd"?

Nikola

Well it's a theory that responds to some really weird and just outlandish things that happen around Alessa. Like that extremely venomous snake on the excursion that has no business being there. Alessa just so happens to "save" von Dorn with an ineffective method that should have left herself poisoned, but nope the group was near the finish line and medical aid not far behind.

This was a really good chapter, and people might disagree with me on my reason why, because it was much less focused on the children in Tori's family. I understand the focus on them is probably some sort of set up for later so that Tori and Piers can adopt thier own kids due to their preferences, but I honestly think it's sucking the momentum out of the story talking about Fiona and her chickens. Ideally soon there will be more schemes, politics, and teen noble drama of some sorts.

Simon Kellis

I’m not sure if I overlooked any of the authors commentary, but the “mechanics”(aka favor) is now shown to be a result of the charm. Therefore the “mechanics” reflect actual affects of the lite magic of the world. My theory is that Either Victoria’s soul lived another life while Sebastian was returning her soul to where it was supposed to be after the accident and returned after the crash. Or Tori reincarnated as Victoria and the soul trauma caused her to remember her last life and has had some sort of dissociation.

Nikola

Hmm yes when things are going well for Tori the game mechanics likes to throw things at her.

Feels like the other shoe's now going to drop

Mack

Cute. I wonder where things will go from here. Being back at school with so many removed from Alessa's influence and getting the charm disabled soon might lead to some interesting things !!


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