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"Virus" B2 | Chapter 54. It begins

🕑 Added 2025-07-30 16:46:03 +0000 UTC

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Maslo

Ah, got it. And no worries, the pace was meant to speed up now anyway. If I were to write every single of those 57 days of Fusion War, we would be her for the next 3 years.

JB

Keep at it though. The story has potential

JB

The dialoge has improved but the pacing feels very slow. When i say get on with it i mean the big reveals more than the battle. Or the interactions with other forces.


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