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The Red Pen - Performance Review
🕑 Added 2025-04-13 22:29:59 +0000 UTCHello my retconned $10 patrons!
I'm back with a fun little break from Curse of Desires. This one's got lots of slutty on-the-fly reality edits in an office setting, a big juicy futa bj climax, and the return of everybody's favorite artifact. Let's see the synopsis!
Cliff Arnolds has been called into his new boss's office. She wants to go over a few HR complaints and a make just a few corrections and notes on his file. Little does he realize that every little change she makes with that red pen of hers becomes real. Now he's on a slippery slope as she pays him back for his chauvinistic behavior, turning him girlier and sluttier with each stroke of her pen!
Gosh, it was great to do another Red Pen story. I've wanted to do another for a while now, it's just been a matter of figuring out the right setting for it. The office set up is maybe a little traditional, but it's a great venue for the pen to shine through. I guess the trick is to find a good location. A library would be great, or maybe a government office? I might aim to have some more fun with the pen in the future now that it's apparently just out there. If you want more, or think of a great location for it, let me know!
Coming up next - in three weeks - it's the finale of Curse of Desire! Will our protagonist find the girl who cursed him? Or will he just end up even more feminized for all his searching? After that, please look forward to Media Blitz, where a a reality bender creates futanari chaos by manipulating the media people are consuming. Then, it's another commission in which a guy's girlfriend is the object of desire of another girl, and she intends to use her reality app to swap roles with him!
If you liked this one, please let me know! I love love love hearing from you. Either leave a message or come on by the Discord.
A great big thanks on this one to my lovely wife, the undying flame of my heart, for her grace and patience. Thank you as well to my editor Selkie for telling me to dig deeper into the hotness, and also for finding my millions of little errors (go check her out on TGS and Smash!) Thank you, last but not least, to all of you for your support, readership and dedication! Thank you so much.
Enjoy!
Comments
Razmagurk
I don't often write direct sequels but there's a ton of potential in this one as she goes around transforming more and more of it. Would be a lot of fun to see how the whole company is doing months or years into her reign, maybe she ends up letting all her power get to her head and really going hog-wild with it. Definitely something I could return to!
Jakal
Mmm would definitely like to see more from this office setting :p
