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Bonus Short Story: The Level 99 Hero vs The Demon Queen

🕑 Added 2021-06-29 00:43:31 +0000 UTC

Comments

Drake

Honestly feels like it could be a seperate side story all on its own

GreenWilder

Damn, I love it. Very fun story. The weird game like setting is very appealing to isekai loving trash like me. The show of complete domination at the beginning was fun and exciting, the level drain section was hot as hell and the romantic twist at the end was a very pleasant surprise. Although it could have been good too, I'm glad now that it wasn't a tragic end after he confessed his love. Took me a while to read it all but I'm very glad I did. If there's any more in the future, I'll definitely read that too.

Frostworks

Thank you, you're very kind! I definitely had a lot of fun writing it, too, and was feeling really inspired--so I'm glad that came across in the writing. I feel like I set the bar quite high right off the bat with something like this, though now lol

FunShade

Loved this short story! You definitely have a knack for writing playful femdom fun. This demon queen and the way she dominated the hero hit me just right!

Frostworks

Haha, yeah--don't worry, I wasn't about to throw in too much cruelty for a wider audience. I know that people like the fluffier stuff, so I tried to veer it towards that as best I could--even if admittedly I feel like I stumbled a few times throughout and wanted to elaborate more on certain aspects of the story

Frostworks

Ahhh thank you so much for your kind words ;~; I'm glad my short story could be so thought-provoking and be this enjoyable! I'll definitely try to deliver more in the future if I can!

Frostworks

I'm glad, haha. I definitely wanted it to not be a completely crushing end--and tried to give it something of a 'sweet' ending, so I'm happy it worked out : P

Frostworks

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for your kind words <3

UNOriginal

To be honest I was a bit scared that this short story would be as mean-spirit as the ghost one you did quite a long time ago but I was very pleasantly surprised, so yeah loved it through and through

Vincent Claut

I love ! There is everything in this story! The context is worthy of Monster Quest, the codes of Japanese anime are taken up with humor, the queen of demons, and a delicious succubus full of eroticism, the hero is a good criticism of fanaticism who ends up making the right decision anyway at the right time, and above all there is love at the end! Love that transforms fantasy into a fairy tale and that sublimates sex and eroticism. The turnaround is phylosophical and sublime! Well done ! Well done ! I want more !

Richard Hardslab

That was a fun read, I especially appreciated the end.

Daniel Sellers

The was quite a treat, great job

Frostworks

Hahhh--that'd sure be something

Frostworks

I shall, if the inspiration hits, haha

Red Squirrel General

Demon queen version of Cynthia sounds good :D

Pseudo Handle

Please, continue.

Frostworks

Haha, I suppose it is an achievement of sorts, isn't it? Thank YOU for reading it--and I hope it was enjoyable!

Frostworks

Yay, I'm glad~ It was a lot of fun to write--and I'd love to do more of this stuff in the future if people would want it!

Stormchaser007

I...lo...lov...Loved it!

Mr Blah

Well this was quite a pleasant surprise! Thanks for the short story, and congrats on making too large for Patreon's pop-in text editor to load I suppose?

Frostworks

Well spotted, haha. Admittedly I was in a daze after writing this, so tried my best to nail everything. Unfortunately Patreon seems to just...not load when I attempt to edit it due to the large word count, so it might be stuck as it is, which frustrates me. Dx I'll definitely add it to the offline copy though!

Stormchaser007

Started reading and noticed a typo, lightning not lighting...sorry, but when it comes to weather thats where I excel.

Frostworks

oops a tiny paragraph at the start got eaten up, and i can't seem to get into the editor to correct it, as I think the story is too long for it to load up properly. Apologies for that. Hopefully it won't detract from the rest of the story ;~;