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Chapter 108 - A Real Strength

🕑 Added 2025-03-01 01:52:32 +0000 UTC

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Kevin McLaughlin

Regular rucksack. Small round shield. I used to use one similar to what I have in mind - about two feet diameter. Pretty easy to remove from a ruck; but if it's going to cause confusion I might just have him have strapped it to the back of the ruck instead.

Kevin McLaughlin

Both on Sue, but I might need to make that more clear. :)

MARK FRINK

How big a backpack does Farnsworth have! Even a small shield wouldn't fit into a big backpack. Maybe you should have it attached to the outside of the backpack. Also, shouldn't they have entered the Domain of the monster in the mall when they were that close to the mall? If so, then they should start seeing some zombies investigating the incursion.

MARK FRINK

Why didn't you have Selena upgrading the rest of her force with some of the crystals she had? That would increase their effectiveness and thus their chance of winning the fight. Also, were Selena and Kara walking together or both on Sue? Wouldn't the others have seen them passing crystals back and forth? I would think the others would be getting upset, considering the number of crystals Selena has.


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