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Chapter 123 - Unexpected Ally

🕑 Added 2025-03-23 03:38:05 +0000 UTC

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Kevin McLaughlin

Fixed the within typo and removed the Shadow Bolt name (good catch - whoops!). She shouldn't have known the spell name yet. Glad that bit with Lyonius worked for you. Wasn't wholly sure it hit right, so I'm glad it did!

Kevin McLaughlin

Nooo - she was supposed to have cast a drain to heal herself a bit. Fixed that. ;) Thanks!

MARK FRINK

Great fight scene so far, but Selena has broken ribs and almost no health and she is flitting about as if she is fully healed. Did Professor Carver cast a healing spell on her?

Lorie Holmes

This has been an epic fight!! Have loved every minute of it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

87894354

Thanks for the chapter. "Maybe the Shadow Bolt had wounded him more than I realized." Not sure about this. She doesn't know the name of the spell yet (as stated at the start of the chapter). Although, she's retelling this story, so I guess it's ok. "Sue smacked one of the wraiths with a Fireball, knocking it back, but the other was right on my tail as I came without spitting distance of the dirt." Normally, we say "within spitting distance". As in, very close. If "without spitting distance" was a deliberate choice, I'm not sure about the intentions behind it. Briefly using mind control on a sapient, sentient being (the wraith) would normally lead to complex questions about morality. But, counterpoint, those wraiths are *total dicks* so Selena gets a free pass this time. Thank you for coming to my TED talk. It's good to see Lyonius shift from Mr Sophisticated Lord Of Undeath to just calling Selena a "bitch". Really shows how much this battle has gotten to him. We saw how Turner really wasn't used to people being able to defy him, and had trouble adjusting to the reality of dealing with Selena. It's probably even worse for the Forgotten King. He'd been spending his time with his undead minions, beings enslaved to his will and incapable of opposing him... and then some student not only stands up to him, but manages to actually harm him. Repeatedly. No wonder this knocked him for a loop.


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