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Lady Atlas (Man to Superhero MILF TG AP)

🕑 Added 2025-05-05 22:51:46 +0000 UTC

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John Smith

Obviously this shares a universe with Meteor Woman, but I also noticed a reference to the organization Artemis, which is what the hero group was called in your Madam Maternity superhero story. Does that mean that story is also part of this universe/we could see some of those characters appear in cameo in the future?

Fox Face

Thanks a heap for pointing this out, Azena. My apologies for the muckup! I've corrected the Lady Atlas name part and figured out the other part - I pasted the in-media-res start to write it into the start of Issue 8, then forgot to delete the duplicate. Total mea culpa. I've uploaded the correct version now - thanks again for taking the time to point this out.

Azena

There are some pretty significant formatting, continuity and grammatical errors in this. There’s a point where Lady Atlas is called Lady Atlas before she comes up with the name. And the single biggest issue is this part. “I need to go back home, ” she said, turning to Malerna. She had to swallow her emotions down just to get control of them. “I have to go tell Cody that I’m changing back. ”“Are you kidding? I’m a nineteen year old man. And besides, I’m not your freakin’ son, and you’re not my freakin’ mother! I don’t have a mother!” It feels like something got cut accidentally.