Barker Tree
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Getting Back on Track!
🕑 Added 2017-08-18 15:31:32 +0000 UTC Hey friends!I've been rewriting The Infinity Device, making it bigger and better. (Removing typos, adding typos, etc.) The first chapter has been fully renovated!
We got taken down on the EMCSA, but hopefully this first chapter will be reposted tomorrow.
There's no creation-charge for these revisions. I'm just happy I've gotten around to making time to do so! (Although I can't wait to progress in the story...)
You can see it tomorrow on the site, or download the sexy .pdf below.
Cheers,
Barker
Comments
Barker Tree
No, you're awesome!
Barker Tree
Hey! Thanks for saying so. We'll see how long I can keep the streak going!
Istmael
Awesome revision!
This revision was really, really good. As much as I'm looking forward to chapter Seven and beyond, rereading this chapter was a delight with all the changes you've made. I especially love how you took the time to flesh out each change and give Annika added memories with each one. If you're planning on doing that with each character, the story will improve dramatically, I think.
