BlaiseCorvin
patreon
Nora Blurb, Draft 2
🕑 Added 2018-07-30 15:57:27 +0000 UTC Second try:--------------------
*Nora Hazard's story began over three years prior to the events of Delvers LLC: Welcome to Ludus.*
Nobody likes an escort mission. Nobody.
Unfortunately for Nora, she'll be stuck travelling with with Jessica, an American gamer, and Christopher, a Filipino man with a mysterious past. Somehow, the former Jackals gang leader must keep the two Terrans alive while heading south for Enheduanna’s new, insane mission.
Nora will have no time to prepare, or even to stay in Soron to enjoy her unexpected celebrity status. Instead, she will need to leave for Tolstey after healing from injuries sustained in battle, wounded while protecting Soron.
Despite what some may say about her now, Nora knows she is no hero. People expecting too much from her will probably be disappointed. But with the help of some new weapons and greater orb-Bonded power, surviving her new, suicidal quest might be merely improbable, not impossible.
Regardless of what happens--whether fulfilling her mission or learning to trust again--Nora will do things her own way, on her own terms.
-----------------------
This definitely needs some more refining but I think it hits all the points I want to make.
Comments
Blaise Corvin
Thanks everyone. I have made one more slight change and posted this to Facebook for a quick litmus test before publishing. You all helped a ton!
Carl Gherardi
Much improved re: target audience from v1. Thumbs up
