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PokéSync: B1 — 61. Unwanted Emotion

🕑 Added 2021-12-01 11:28:43 +0000 UTC

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Justin Timothy

For sure without a good reason to per-sue strength your bound to need one in a story like this so it’s good to get the reasoning out early just also really excited to have you writing again cause I enjoy this story so much and can’t wait for more which is funny cause I’ve played most of the Pokémon games and whenever there’s a story based on what I grew up playing I just need to see how it goes and so far I’m excited so keep up the great work.

SME

I've been really thinking about it and I think I want to try and make this part go as fast as possible. I want to try to get to at least one of the battles in the next chapter.

SME

I can totally see where you're coming from on the progress of the characters in actual battling and growing. We've gotten one gym badge, done a contest, and had several battles thus far in terms of them actually doing things. Plasma came in and caused troubles. My idea on this was primarily to give the girls breathing room and give the characters drive to push forward. Just wanting to follow her brother or their family wasn't really something to stick when it got rough, which was why Rhea losing the gym and stuff like this has been necessary ... at least from a story standpoint in my mind.

Justin Timothy

I know the character development is important but not a lot of progress in the story overall but still enjoyed the chapter can’t wait for more


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