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The Oscillation: B4 — 39. Shifting Course

🕑 Added 2021-12-06 09:03:04 +0000 UTC

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SME

Hehe

Opala

Two cliffs in the same chapter? That's got to be some sort of record. ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ❤

SME

It really does make it interesting doing a clean and non-clean version when I was first making the edits I was like ... what can I use that would sound decent instead of hell and not be comical? I guess Hades (from my time playing disgaea 4) and seemed to work pretty well and using underworld at some points. Added and interesting twist. He-he-he, I do find it interesting how things change between them. I'm glad you like it. Adam's going through and looking at some of the edits since he couldn't do it last night so I'll be seeing if he's spotted anything shortly. Thanks, Eric! I always love seeing what people say about the chapters, and if someone does have a problem, I try to see if I can fix it. Maybe I'll add a bit at the end discussing the gift and give a little teaser of Rachel smiling upon seeing it or something he-he-he (witch cackling)

SME

No, actually, I only do the swearing on Patreon xD I just asked because I use hades instead of hell on the clean version.

Eric

Well the regulars posts are non swearing ? It’s ages since I have read the swearing parts on royal roads

SME

Guessing you’re more of a fan of the non swearing version xD

Eric

Even better hades hare for the win

SME

Next chapter 😊 I wanted it to be a surprise. So instead of just telling you about it we’d get to see Rachel with it in action

Eric

Do you show us Rachel’s spoils of war next chapter?🥳 I guess it has to something really disturbing if everyone is concerned.. maybe a whip ?

Eyes wide

No it was needed I always like how all if not most of your characters have depth and I can understand somewhat their motivation and wants In life this is why I ascribe the feeling I'm getting to it just being the wait that makes it feel like it drags on I'm sort of stuck hoping their will be more story in the chapter before the long wait . Alert I know its kicking off next week plus I'm super hype to find out how her family reacts to the change and what they change into .

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

SME

I possibly could have told you guys she went and explained things to the president and not unraveled everything to the group as a whole and show Rachel’s anger at being manipulated. I felt it was a needed close before having the fun stuff next week

Eyes wide

Still think it's a great story. It's even encouraged me to read your other works in hopes of a glimpse at the deeper story .

Eyes wide

I have so many questions once a week post is killing me have to wait awhole week to find out what happens next and u could focus somewhere else that and the endless dialogue makes it fell like the story is dragging but that could be my need for more information and story although I will admit the wait then chapters with alot of character interaction leave me feeling abit starved for story I'm not complaining just an observation I get my fill at the end of an ark but with deep hunger during said ark

Eyes wide

Thanks for the chapter.


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