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Undying Empire: B1 — 26. Rival Sisters

🕑 Added 2020-03-15 05:00:36 +0000 UTC

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SME

Heart: Yup, all the spiders have it, but not genetically as powerful or built as the sisters. Human vs Spider bodies: I tried to make it clear, but the human form is that, a form, and not the same as human. They still retain many of their traits as their original form that enhances their human one. Although, yes, there are advantages to being in their original form. The mother is a bit of a different story with her Morph ability that allows her to combine many traits, though. You'll learn more weaknesses to their human forms as you go on. Communication: I tried to make it visually apparent by showing them breathing. How they breath and release air is how they communicate. The plates on their back exhales and parts in the joints inhale to provide fast intake of oxygen when needed. The system: Nope! I never said any other world had The Oscillation event happen. As of this moment, it's only been stated to have happened on Earth. =))

Boris

That's some insane rivalry. Going to be fun to see where it goes. Tasting the air with their *hair*, three hearts...are all the morphed spiders are like that, or are there some unique differences. Weird that it seems as if the spider body's only plus is the relative bulk&strength. They were the apex predator on multiple worlds, feels a bit unfair that human bodies - even if super augmented - are superior in every way. "They’re quick and simple" - How did the spiders communicate before? It was stated they didn't have names, just smells, so how did they reference each other? Are names quick and simple compared to that as well? “This system,” Azalea hummed - her opinion and the question of what is a witch are a bit confusing. Didn't they have the same system for ages longer than humans? Was it less sentient for them and didn't include magic AT ALL?

Selvaria

<3

SME

Thank you. Just fixed those. ^_^7

Denis Dube

That was a wonderfully light hearted chapter. Captures the siblings relationship real well. Also their physical abilities are clearly superhero or rather supervillain grade. The hair is delightfully OP. Suggestions: * Senses: "Activating the Spatial Perception skill, her other sense faded into the background" * an: "conditions to receive and answer." * just one back: "brushing back her hair back at their passing" * I expected legs: "motion of her leg’s" * I felt this came out of nowhere and was ignored by Azalea in the next paragraph: "“Don’t you think it’s insane?” She whispered."


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