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Undying Empire: B1 — 30. Juggernaut

🕑 Added 2020-04-11 05:51:05 +0000 UTC

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Denis Dube

Just re-read the updated chapter. Love the extension and especially this line: "if you’re this shocked to see me, then Azalea would kill you on sight! Her colors were always more eye-catching."

SME

Certainly was an interesting choice. Perhaps it was Tiffany's subtle influence ... she wanted her personal time with Azalea and she doesn't care much for humanity. xD Just fixed it, and thank you! ^_^7 I do plan to go back in and extend parts or tweak things. I don't feel like I've quite given Camellia's chapter the justice due in some of the scenes.

Denis Dube

Thanks for the chapter. Camelia is an odd choice for a hostage rescue mission. Still, she lucked out that the Ri'bot didn't decide to kill the humans. Favorite bits: * Cam getting all excited that the Ri'bot aren't running away from her (initially) * Her zeal for squeezing juice out of Ri'bots. Should get a new nickname: the Juicer. * The smell of fear making her hidden fangs sting. What attention to detail. * Beasts of burden = big happy meals on the hoof * Humans fainting? Clearly must be the beauty of her true form and definitely not going into arachnophobic shock. Typo: You're->You, "You’re definitely aren’t one of those creatures"


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