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Undying Empire: B1 — 31. Fear

🕑 Added 2020-04-18 07:50:37 +0000 UTC

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SME

That's a good point. I mean, Ri'bot don't have facial hair. I might need to revise that. xD

Boris

"Quen’Talrat’s flaming beard" is such a funny curse, especially taken with Flaming White Ape, but do the Ri'bot know what a beard is? After all, they keep referring to hair as "fur"

Denis Dube

Re-read after the update. Love the additional detail on the river escapade. Iris is even more impressive now too. Found one typo, I think you meant "vine" here: "her fingers around the fine"

SME

Okay, I'll see about changing it. =)) True, Camellia is quite different than her family xD

Denis Dube

Iris is such a stark contrast to Cam. It's awesome how she just shows up and does the godess act. I'm a little sad the naga slipped away though. Can't be all smooth sailing :( I did find this sentence start awkward: "By the minute, she knew that if Elinor wished". I think it makes more sense as "It was becoming clear that if Elinor wished".

SME

We'll have to see if that happens. ^_^7 It could always change depending on the characters. I didn't actually expect so many humans to come back to the fortress, but given some of the Ri'bot personalities and after looking into average town sizes in Columbia ... I had to do some things that I didn't expect. I'm more of a GM and my characters my players. The GM is often left to pick up the pieces and change things around as the characters do things they're not expecting. hehe ... sometimes my characters make me pull my hair out because of the research I have to do with some of their decisions.

ShadeByTheSea

Iris is awesome, not looking forward to a Yesenia(demon) vs Elinor arc though.


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