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Undying Empire: B1 — 45. Hope For Unity

🕑 Added 2020-07-25 05:25:35 +0000 UTC

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SME

TY, corrected those.

Denis Dube

+1 for "Effective. I appreciate the explanation.". Also really love the reaction to Iris offering a fight. "“It will be my little surprise,” Elinor finished", wait where's my surprise? Don't tell me I have to wait for next chapter? Suggestions: * "Loci repeated with a giggle as the blustering Ri’bot as he hobbled after her.", at the blustering? * "Loci’s scratched her left side", hand scratched? There's a missing word here... * "chest heaving as dropped to a trembling knee", missing she

Martynas Samsonas

Well that was actually a bit longer chapter than usual :D. Still loved it tho.

SME

I added the extra part with Iris.

Martynas Samsonas

The desire to read the chapter the moment it was released is so large... But just a bit longer I shall manage to save some good stuff for otherwise boring Monday!!!

SME

Mhm. People that make fun of religous people are dicks and people who can't question what they believe are sheep (that's true with everything, though =P)

Ensos2

Another way of looking at religion would be trying to find meaning and reason. As an example: People did not know what caused weather and then attributed that to some all mighty figure in the sky and just stuck to it instead of finding an alternative answer. Add to that the fact that people's pride gets hurt when you call them out and the emotional response and you have not just a lack of skepticism but also an unwillingness to admit you're wrong. And the rest, as they say, is history.

Drinko

I'd prefer a Ri’bot perspective! Gurali maybe?

Sinax

Iris!

brunoid

^Agreed. I would like Iris, tho.

Ensos2

I'd like to know Iris's and Loci's perspective, maybe Iona? THERE ARE TOO MANY INTERESTING CHARACTERS!!!


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