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Undying Empire: B2 — 2. Set In Motion

🕑 Added 2020-09-19 06:31:05 +0000 UTC

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SME

Huh O.o one sec. I'll check that out. Fixed, and changed minacious to baleful. Hopefully, that will be easier to understand.

Denis Dube

Thanks for the chapter. Can't have an empire without maids. Good thing this is being addressed. With matching outfits. Hopefully this gets illustrated at some point. I can't recall seeing the word minacious used before anywhere. My spell checker flags it, but Google says its a real word, albeit rare. How rare? According to Google Ngrams, it's usage frequency is 0.00000002. To put that into context, the word defenestration, an oddly specific word for throwing people out of windows, has a frequency of 0.0000018 (i.e.: 90 times more common). My suggestion is to reword so readers don't need to look it up. "and choosing your niece, which is also a Plant Calle", which->who if you want to avoid objectifying poor Nina. Also, the index page shows "B2 — 1. An Empress Rises" as the latest chapter.

Katherine

Thanks for the chap~ Hopefully miss naga joins her. I'd be depressing if she didn't.


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