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Undying Empire: B2 — 3. The Avana

🕑 Added 2020-09-26 05:00:17 +0000 UTC

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Denis Dube

Thanks for the chapter. More potential enemies to the party is great. Flappy times ahead. Found just two issues: 1) "That, it was" is a comma unloved, and 2) "It’s simple, I believe increasing my Intelligent Undead limit is in order to resurrect one of these Jakal to gain answers; that also means more maids." is a sentence that would benefit from being broken up a bit. Especially the "is in order" part could use a hard stop right after.

Martynas Samsonas

Why does it feel like those birds are wyverns and the big one a dragon :D still taking from other stories about dragons I can see it being extremely prideful and refusing becoming a part of royal court. But well guess will see with time :). Thanks for the chapter as always.


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