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Undying Empire: B2 — 5. Duties Of The Head Maid

🕑 Added 2020-10-10 09:12:41 +0000 UTC

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SME

Indeed! Each of the servants has a Title or Job that they have been given which means they don't have the combat Jobs or Titles that the more combat-oriented minions possess, and are also not sent to battle which means they won't be the same level as the others. Generally, they can fight, as Tiffany said, and have Classes/Sub-Classes/part of a Unit, but have a different task than the combat minions meant for the battlefield.

SME

Thank you, Denis. I just went through those corrections. Updating it now.

Denis Dube

Thanks for the chapter. The recap of the characters at the end was actually quite useful for me. Suggestions: "The rest of you became familiar with one another.", become "yet the uncomfortable part of her was the fact his study didn’t put her off", of her? "It’s not 2012…", ok, but what year is it then? A reader today can assume it's around 2020, but that gets less clear later "She snapped out of her revere", reverie "before it slowly cut with her embarrassment", needs rewording and why would she be embarrassed? Annoyed yes. Adronica is told to wait for Iris, "Standby until she returns", then gets into a spat with her brother. Okay. But then somehow she's with Elinor and being asked to sing around here: "Adronica froze in place, halfway to the elevator with the old clothes in hand.". It seems like you meant Valerie instead.

Katherine

Thanks for the chap~ Yay~ New characters~ So, I guess miss new head maid can do counter espionage activates as well as being head maid. :D

MacDB

Very cool new set of characters


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