Leaqio.com
AuthorSME from patreon
AuthorSME patreon

The Oscillation: B3 — 60. Beginning A Legend's Quest

🕑 Added 2020-12-07 07:20:44 +0000 UTC

Comments

Andy

Huh, after the edit I either didn't know Nam was an ability user or forgot that he was.

SME

Quite true. The issue right now with Rachel is that she hasn’t needed to advance in a combative area yet, she’s been dealing more with the mental games of the situation. Selvaria may be super powerful, but she can only be in that form in the water and she dies very quickly and swiftly loses a lot of power outside of it. There will be more advancements made by our hare girl. Her grandfather and cousin will be mentioned after the adventure and time will be made for Rachel to visit him. More on that will come. 😊 Please, don’t hesitate to tell me anything else that bothers you or that you enjoy and want more of. I can be fairly fluid in a lot of directions with the story.

Helios

I know it's a bit irrational, but I can't help feeling annoyed at how strong the other Mythickin, and even some of the Legendkin are compared to Rachel. I mean, giant apex-predator Leviathan, overpowered vampire-reaper girl, summon a literal warship, but Rachel has good hearing and Super strength(?). I know her role is the really intelligent leader, but I can't help but want her to be stronger than she is. Though I say that, her lunar abilities are still pretty ambiguous, so maybe that's her big thing? Also when is she going to see that grandfather of hers? Because it feels like you're setting up them going to Cuba really soon.

DogeDoge

Cool!

SME

I went through a bit and found a lot of issues. I’ll be cleaning it up today.

DogeDoge

*giggling

DogeDoge

The stingray thing has me googling pretty much the entire time. :D

SME

Aww, sorry to hear that. 😟

SME

If I can swing it. I put as much time as I can into each chapter. I wanted to actually write a lot more in this chapter but ran out of time.

Katherine

It's been so long sense the last bout of combat, my mind is ill prepared to get me in the mood here.

Martynas Samsonas

O yeah come to think of it I guess this was not noticed but those quests legendkin get are like an xp farming zone for mythic kin :D

Martynas Samsonas

All of these guys are battle junkies by this point :D. And also this is seriously entertaining, now to wait for next chapter

Andy

Oh man, I can't wait for the next chapter. Reading this really got me hyped up for next weeks chapter. Btw are you going to release an extra chapter for Christmas?


More Creators