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Undying Empire: B2 — 23. The Puppet Princess

🕑 Added 2021-02-13 09:25:30 +0000 UTC

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Lothrik

"since her body nolonger reacted to pain." <- missing space between no and longer. :)

Martynas Samsonas

Yeah it's actually kinda crazy to churn out chapters while keeping a schedule intact without any kind of backlog. They are fresh out of the oven so to speak :D. But that leaves no time whatsoever to rest yourself, and that's a recepie for disaster

SME

I’m slowly getting a backlog chapter written in all the fictions to give myself breathing room

SME

Yeah, I posted it at 3 am and passed out after. Didn’t have much time to go over it for grammar. I’m hoping to finish up the backlog chapter to TO today too so I can start releasing it on a set schedule now like Pokesync

Martynas Samsonas

Well that explains some minor grammar mistakes I've spotted :D but there was nothing that would change the meaning of words, just stuff that one would tend to automatically read correctly and just afterwards be like wait hol up :D (also I'm really not someone that should ever point out grammar mistakes, since mines fairly horrible as well :P )

SME

I’ll see about clearing up the language today. 😊 They put her to sleep so she wouldn’t suffer or cause a panic while Klaus went to get the people that could help. Elinor would like to add her to her army but knows it wouldn’t be the smartest move.

Martynas Samsonas

Ohhh the plot thickens :P. That said did they just put the princess to sleep or actually killed her for revival so she would nolonger be affected by that curse. Might also be the case of putting her to sleep for someone to remove the curse 🤔. Anyways it was really interesting :D thanks for the chapter.


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