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The Oscillation: B4 — 1. Heart Attack

🕑 Added 2021-02-22 04:00:06 +0000 UTC

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SME

Hehe Nia is great as you learn more about her.

Opala

I wonder how "The Game" works; can she have it eat a bunch of outfits and use it as a portable wardrobe?

Justin Timothy

Trying to materialize anything of a passion is hard cause one of the curses is that you find yourself wondering if you did it justice cause you want everything to be there but don’t worry just do you and put some feelers out cause you got a community here willing to give you honest feedback maybe not right away but every person who supported you for your love of world building has your back also for any good story writer there will be hard times as well as self criticism but just got to take the time to regroup and find that special kind of inspiration just waiting for you to find and use in some way but in the end I’m gonna be one of the few that say you got this 😊

SME

Hehe, true, true. I've been trying to write better male characters ... I think it's one of my big weaknesses that I need to work on. I just craft so many female characters and it comes so naturally. I'm trying to do Anthony and Rachel justice and having a realistic relationship, which does go through ups and downs. Yeah, Reed and Clay seem to be kicking it off really well. Hmm ... Clay's family might need to move if he'll be spending time in Miami, though, and maybe Reed will have to swap main home addresses to one of his residents in Miami xD I'm happy you liked the chapter, too. I've been getting this feeling that something's off, but I can't put a finger on it, and it's bugging me. I do feel for the ATM fans. I really want to get it back to weekly chapters ... a lot. Sora's tale is such a roller coaster of emotions and struggles to just find a complete family ... the thing she's really lacked and wanted almost all of her life.

Justin Timothy

Great chapter really good way to wrap up this particular quest also please no jinxing the potential relationship cause I think there’s too much story/chapter potential to just destroy it even over time so rooting for Rachel and Anthony they just fit too well if you know what I mean also just gonna call it reed and clay BFF’s😏

Helios

Uh oh. "Anthony wasn’t technically her boyfriend, but he might as well be at this point. 𝙎𝙝𝙚'𝙙 𝙬𝙤𝙣; he saw her as more than just an acquaintance or friend, and she couldn’t have imagined how good that felt." Warning bells ringing in my head. They've been building up since B3-45 but now they're going full blast. I foresee these dates are not going to end well.

Eyes wide

Thanks for the answer I was under the impression that all humans got seeds but only a few activated. Thanks for clearing it up for me

SME

It would help to see what outfits everyone likes or pieces people would like added in discord. Just link pictures you think would best fit in your opinion. 😊

SME

Exp is involved with the seed attached to their spirits. So, if humans can somehow get one then they could start leveling which isn’t impossible as we have seen things in Undying Empire that can progress in that direction

Martynas Samsonas

This chapter was priceless :D. And Rachel's reactions, just perfect. Also the outfit is certainly strong now but seeing as it can level up, it's potential is basically limitless, and if Rachel would find some more gear she can just let the outfit absorb it to incorporate it. A dream type of armor every gamer would salivate over :D

Eyes wide

Do the humans get xp for involvement with quest would be cool if it some how triggers the change in them . Glad Rachel's relationship has progressed. R we off to her grand dad's place?

Zacle

not really a fan of the outfit so far but maybe that'll change with a drawing/as time goes. the stats it gives are definitely super strong though.

Van

Hmmm I don’t know if you remember near the binging of the story Rachel was just wearing Booty shorts and a sports bra. So modesty wise they might as well be the same thing just a different style. Also one of the perks of this outfit would be lesson If more skin was covered up

SME

Oh, yes, I'd love that =D Robbuz could probably do it when we come around, but we've reached the end of the slots I had with her O.o I didn't even know until she told me. I asked for like 15 more slots earlier last year, but who knows with her list. She'll get back to me this week.

Bryan wiggins

Could we get a picture drawn of this outfit sometime in the furture?

Nicholas Pankratz

Moongmor sure knows how to deliver. I'm gonna guess that Rachel is going to try to teach her new outfit to be a bit more modest, maybe have it absorb normal clothes so that she can wear the designs of the normal clothes while still enjoying the perks of this living garment


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