Leaqio.com
AuthorSME from patreon
AuthorSME patreon

Undying Empire: B3 — 34. Way Of The Strong

🕑 Added 2022-04-30 07:14:35 +0000 UTC

Comments

SME

For the first: “I do not find it amusing that another entity has invaded my domain, Watchman of the Silent Streets—one I do not recognize, which should be impossible given no other should be within Existence—yet here you stand before me. I must question your motives by incarnating into the mortal plane to meet me.” She paused, coming to a conclusion herself while focusing on his faceless expression and silent posture. “Explain yourself, Herald of the Silent Night. Why is Erra’s high constable here?” As for the comment on consort, this was in another Existence, so this is not the Elinor we know, just as in The Oscillation the Izanami we know is the strongest version Revilla has seen, and she shows multiple of her husband that Revilla consumed and of Izanami herself. 11D beings and up are singular existences in and Existence. It's like there could be multiple versions of Inari in TO Existence but in ATM Inari is singular because those beings rose to the top of that Existence hierarchy; there are reasons for that that will be revealed but how it works. How does this sound? In any case… Elinor smiled as they rose out of the ruined civilization to meet Voukey. There is much to accomplish, and I need strength if I am to reach my goals of a prosperous kingdom and family while standing on her own. I am not a prisoner; I am the Jailor, and I will not be chained by any.

SME

Thanks! I’ll get to those! I have so many edits backlogged I need to do T_T we’re to some exciting things I’ve built up to though!

Darth Mole

Awesome chapter!! Just a couple of things…. —— “I do not find it amusing that another entity has invaded my domain, Watchman of the Silent Streets—one I do not recognize, which should be impossible given no other should be within Existence—yet here you stand before me.  I must question your motives by incarnating into the mortal plane to meet me.” She paused, keeping focused on his faceless expression and silent posture.  “Explain yourself, Herald of the Silent Night.  Why is Erra’s high constable here?” —— Based on my interpretation of the two paragraphs above, I find that conflict with one another. They follow one another but it seems a revelation is possibly missing? She doesn’t know and then she does? Also, this Erra took Elinors past self as a consort. Does that mean he is more powerful than her? I thought Elinor was at the pinnacle of the dimensions? I only ask because, to me, consort suggests one is less than the other. Finally, there was a paragraph near the end where, to me, it read that Elinor is along for the ride instead of being there winner in the contest. It was about her desire for family. I may have just read it wrong but it seemed the goddess was respecting Elinor’s previous wishes despite Elinor having absorbed the goddess. Thank you so much for such an amazing story!

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter


More Creators