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Undying Empire: B3 — 43. Caged Tricksters

🕑 Added 2022-06-25 08:05:57 +0000 UTC

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Dont_like_to_Talk

Yes that makes sense. Thank you very much.

SME

Oh, absolutely, which was why I wrote the earlier post about going to the east and not the north; what I'm doing now is cutting off a lot of plots I had going to get things back into a more tight scenario. Much of this was supposed to happen later but in my haste to quicken the pace I ended up just introducing far too much content. So we had: 1. The Princess coming and the plots surrounding that. 2. The War preparing in the Nalvean Empire 3. The hints at the republic's collapse in the far western nation with the Argent Dawn. 4. The Runic AI 5. The Ri'bot War and Elinor getting the Seeds to purify her sister 6. The Maw 7. Thor's and the Gods introduction. 8. Sari'ael's fight. 9. Covenant plots. 10. Ke'Thra'Ma naturally needing to be revived due to the heavens opening. And several more plots... In my attempt to speed up the pace, I ended up creating a whole mess of events. T_T It was me trying to respond to some comments that ended up causing a mess. I would be spreading this out more across time in the rewrite (that will take forever to get to since I have to keep current progress and focus on ATM and TO's rewrite before UE), and so my only option is to just try to condense what I have going and get beyond it to get to a more chill pace again. =( It's just an issue of me introducing so much that all happened around the same time. This was the last introduction before the big battle. Honestly many of the points I mentioned above could have filled 2 or 3 volumes if I had kept at the 'plot pace' I originally planned. Things will start to straighten out from here. As I said in the letter, my issue tends to be too many ideas and with the rush in the plots it ended up becoming a bit of a mess. T_T Does that make sense?

Dont_like_to_Talk

Its just, that there are so many things happening and so many new characters getting introduced that I kind of have a hard time remembering, what happens where and when. Like now for example, there is the quest to the north, the 1v1 battle in a few days, the divine gate opening, the 'war' with the Ribbots, Iris somewhere searching her daughter. The Salamander Princess(I don't know how to correctly spell her name)and her powers that demon wants. Im mostly confused by the time. Like when is what exactly of these events set to happen. Is that understandable/ helpful?.

SME

Could you elaborate?

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter. Im getting slightly confused


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