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PokéSync: B2 — 23. Training Required!

🕑 Added 2022-07-06 08:23:25 +0000 UTC

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SME

I could see that. It was mainly due to us seeing things from Rhea’s pov and seeing how Platinum trainers opinions would be, motivating Rhea but I tried to skip any kind of repetitive parts and only have statements to context of which part the match was on to get the response of Rhea. I suppose I could have just skipped the whole thing and just recapped in a short but decided when writing it a more hands on view would be better. You think it would have been better just skipped to the end without seeing Rhea’s reactions to the battle?

Opala

Not my favourite chapter, the repetition in the first half was a bit too long.

Bast

Thank you for the chapter!


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