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Update: SR Artwork
🕑 Added 2022-12-26 19:05:45 +0000 UTCThoughts? Should I ask him to make the sword thinner and a bit less wide?
What do you think I should ask to have more touched up at this point?
Itβs not done right now, just the next stage of the drafts. I told him a few things could be adjusted and made clearer, such as the sword being more rapier than broad sword, cuts in clothing, and stuff like that.
Comments
Opala
In the concept art B it looks like a serrated sword, which can be quite cool.
SME
Yeah, I asked him to trim it down xD haha it's massive
Opala
Personally, the most offensive thing about the art is the size of the teeth on the sword(assuming it's supposed to be a sword and not a flat, spiky mace). An aggressive flamberge with pointy swells could look similar and much more functional.
