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ATM Vol. 5 and Rewrite Tomorrow
🕑 Added 2023-01-25 22:58:49 +0000 UTCJust a bit busy. We're getting closer to the end of Vol 1 of the rewrite! It's exciting! What has been your thoughts on it so far compared to the original?
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Ryan
(Just to clarify, I completely understand them being cut. This Sora seems to be more in control of herself, and I'm not sure the type of scenes I liked would mesh well with the rewritten plot. Leaving them out genuinely might be for the better storywise.)
Ryan
Not the black out scene specifically, but things like the (second) party where she was mind controlling people.
SME
Tell me what you like about the small things and maybe I can add them. 😊
Ryan
I think it's a better story and quite a bit more focused than the original, even if I miss a lot of the small bits. But that's just the sad reality of editing really.
