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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 27. Family Tails

🕑 Added 2024-06-06 22:28:07 +0000 UTC

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SME

Me thinking from Mia’s point of view is that she is very torn because she says something and is covering up how she really feels. I plan on writing the next chapter from Jarlath’s point of view and questioning some of the decisions Mia is making. She is torn between guilt, protecting Sora, allowing Sora to make mistakes, her own desires, what Wendy needs, etc.

Ryan

Idk, it just feels a bit weird for Mia to play this straight after the talk about how she's jealous and possessive and bad, and how she considered Wendy her daughter, only to immediately hand a lot of that to Noellia.

SME

Hahaha! I’ll fix that in a bit. That is funny. Fixed both!

Ryan

Ah, the link to the Google docs is to the previous chapter. But also you said "Beagle" instead of "bagle"

SME

It could also be Mia putting most of the weight onto Noellia to give her a more solid connection to Wendy and Wendy a more solid connection to Noellia. Hmm.

Ryan

This is, of course, assuming that Wendy remains mostly null void like she had previously. But I think it would be a neat trick Mia could pull

Ryan

I'm kind of wondering how far Mia has stretched this. Because 25% vulpes would fit the description of her as "more like a grandma". While if jarlath had 50%, and Noellia had another 25%, that would still be mostly Noellia/Jarlath, while Noellia and Mia are contributing the same amount.


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