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Effects Of A Gamer Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2025-08-04 15:37:31 +0000 UTC

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Big ToFu

Fun little chapter but the citadel for me was instantly off the table due to their dealings with humanity and the genophage situation not to mention quarian issue. I have always been pro humanity but I like my independent self more which im happy he's going that route, just hope he helps humanity first. I get the big picture is saving the galaxy but id always give humanity the leg up first over any xeno period. They can come after I make sure my people are secured.

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Alex I

Really annoyed at yet another example of time skipping without actually skipping. Several C-sec busts and combat encounters over 3 ish months and his level hasn't twitched from what it was when he took out the krogan... Please consider how the passage of time affects every part of your character or immersion starts unraveling.

Filip Hejný

Unless this is heavy AU none of the named characters from the games should be anywhere near the MC, this is 20 odd years before canon. From wiki: "In 2165, then-Lieutenant David Anderson was the Executive Officer (XO) of the SSV Hastings." "He was commissioned as a second lieutenant in 2156 and participated in the First Contact War the following year." for Admiral Hackett. Anderson as decorated N7 and first contact veteran maybe could be there but he is about the same age as MC so thats a big ask. Hackett is 3 years older than Anderson. Game Shepard is in kindergarden not requesting files on some dude that got voluntold to go and be a space cop. Even including N7s other than those who were present for the training is weird. Those are spec ops... People you send to kick down doors. In ME you maybe give them a ship and broad directive but most likely attach them to existing ships under capitains. They dont get to sit around round tables and discuss whats politically convinient for the aliance. If they are there as they appear in the game right now, by the time canon rolls up both Anderson and Hackett will be sipping space margaritas in space bahamas being retired and Shepard is going to be most likely dead or sitting where Hackett is right now if not retired as well. Even the presence if Gen. Williams is weird unless first contact happened differently. Dude surrendered and his family was toxic in Aliance millitary for the next 20 years going by how Ashley was treated.

Loghead101

Bud, unless the Commander Shepard happens to be Jane’s parents then she shouldn’t be a factor at the moment. The year is still 2160 and Shepard is 4 years old right now. And Anderson should not be old either. At this point he’s still a young man, it’s only 5 more years in the future that he gets the opportunity to audition as a Spectre.

Darth Vance

I'm a major fan of going the independent route, nobody watching over his shoulder or monitoring his progress for their own greed, nobody to answer to, and nobody to stop him from helping whoever he wants. Plus, with him improving his skills, he could potentially gain the loyalty of the Quarians by helping them find a home that the Council has no control or keep them from claiming

Kazim Zaidi

In the next or when possible I would recommend saying that Anderson had a commendation to become a captain when he failed his spectre assignment due to Saren and say that the Shepard Commander is the husband to Hannah Shepard (mother to Jane/John Shepherd from the game) who later died or something along those lines and have the MC discover a way to have a long life span

Bellerophon

I was really hoping he’d have some sort of loyalty to humanity and worked with the alliance in some form. I’ve always loved HFY stories. Maybe make his company HQ on Earth, and make the alliance his main customers, make humankind as strong as possible. Would be cool to see.

Marius Petrauskas

nice

Gage Scott

Peak, as always. Has there been a timeskip of multiple years because I thought we were only 3-4 years after first contact. Anderson should only be 23 years old, and Sheperd should only be 6. Just kind of curious.

David C.

Whats the time line here? How soon after the first contact with the turians is this? How much time until the attack on eden prime?


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