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Effects Of A Gamer Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-08-18 20:23:50 +0000 UTC

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Big ToFu

Nice, now the question is are you picking this up as your main fic after celestial Smith? I would like to vote on it. Also maybe slide the crew another 5% for loyalty and security. Still surprised his house doesn't have a secured armory or a armor shop he tinker in for side projects. Fun story would like to read more of his cop adventures

travis btmb

Tftc

Connor

As Gage mentioned already, you’ve got the percentage negotiation doubled up with 85% to Arthur and 15% to the mining company twice. Also, the introduction to the Asari receptionist is pretty redundant, you have Arthur introducing himself and mentioning he’s C-Sec and has been involved in some big cases, only for the Asari to then repeat that after looking at the background check she ran like he hadn’t said anything but his name.

Stanley Seymour

Thank you for the new chapter Dragonrise. You really put in a lot of effort and hard work and we appreciate you for it. An excellent step for Morgan and his future plans of prepping for the eventual conflict with the Reapers. Everything flowed and read buttery smooth.

Gabriel Nobriga

Fucking amazing chapter!! The interactions between everyone keep me on the edge of my seat!! Absolutely love your stories!!! Keep it up!

Darth Vance

Damn, now the question comes in how he's going to be able to keep the Council and Alliance off his back till the credits start coming in though, I guess he could just take a high profile case but that would go against what Vakarian told him to do. Anyway, once the credits come, the real work is going to start. I wonder what he'll work on first?

SanMarco Geddes

Absolutely love it! Thanks for the great read

Gage Scott

As always, you write some of my favorite stories. When Arthur and Jendal are talking about the profits, you've written it as 85% to Arthur both times, I assume that first time is meant to read as 85% to Jendal and his people. Also, will you change character ages and stuff? If you just say that Anderson was born 5-10 years earlier & doesn't become a spectre candidate, and the Sheperd he mentions is the commanders mother, you should be fine.

Thomas Hearne

Urdnot Wrex and Zaeed Massani, get!

Kayden High

I need more!! Love mass effect stories

asdo

Hell yeah. time to buy up every merc contract in the galaxy to secure his assets


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