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Effects Of A Gamer 12

🕑 Added 2025-09-18 16:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Xuzar Horan

Its not dead

Ototsu_Yume

Jondum Bau being a spectre already is highly doubtful considering this is 20+ years before canon and Salarians only have a lifespan of around 40 years. MC seems to have gone from being a rather careful individual to being reckless and rather stupid in how he handles situations, not to mention that all of his assets should have been frozen by now. Rather hoping this fic hasn't been dropped, I just signed up for this one, rather sad seeing it's not been updated in over a month.

Darth Vance

Side note, just realized that Arthur could 'discover' the sleeping Prothean on Eden Prime as having his help could prove vital in preparing for the Reapers

Darth Vance

I waited to read all 3 chapters before I commented, unfortunately it took me a while to finish thanks to the Flu, but I finished. 1st, don't know if anyone's told you but this Chapter 10 was a much better improvement. Not to say the other was bad necessarily but the pacing was better here, plus I did like how you had actual consequences to his biotic power growing because even with Gamer's body, he's still human. Humans are not naturally born with the ability to use Biotics, plus the fact he's Matriarch-level in power? He needs to struggle a bit, makes a story interesting. Like others said, I loved how quick the C-sec traitor was apprehended in Ch. 11, also loved seeing Aethyta, love her Krogan bluntness even more and hope she ends up joining Arthur in preparation for the Reapers, also kind of hope you have him recruit others to his side in the preparation Now Ch. 12...I fucking loved it. I also love how it showed the Council's already trying to stifle Humanity's growth and advancement with how they stationed a Spectre there who is apparently ordered to bring in anyone sent to investigate the Prothean artifact or silence them, can only imagine how that would've gone if an Alliance team had been sent to investigate it. While I can understand the Council's need to maintain a balance among all the races, trying to horder a Prothean artifact that the Aliance had found simply because they are 'new' is laughably stupid considering Thessia's advancement. And of course Aria wants to play big dog, little dog; can't wait to see her realize how much of a pup she actually is. Overall, I'm happy with these chapters as things are picking up, I give it 3 more chapters before Arthur makes his exit from the Citadel altogether. Whether the Council or Alliance wants that or not is pointless, since as Pallin's pointed out, he's broken no rules, has a great record as a C-Sec officer, and has shown no inclination to become some great threat, in fact he's already helped improve things for everyone with his inventions. Their greed and paranoia is about to fuck them up so badly and create the very enemy they believe he might become.


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