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Towards A Brighter Future 19
🕑 Added 2025-09-23 11:27:03 +0000 UTCThe sky above Nuceria burned.
Through the upper atmosphere, a metallic tear carved its way earthward, trailing fire and fragments of dying technology. The gestation pod, once a marvel of the Emperor's genetic artistry, now tumbled end over end, its golden surface scarred by xenos weaponry. Eldar shuriken had punched through its protective shell during the journey through the Warp, following the pod through the madness, trying to destroy what the pd contained, their psychic poison eating away at delicate systems meant to nurture and protect the precious cargo within.
Inside, the infant Primarch convulsed as another wave of agony crashed through his developing nervous system. The bio-amniotic fluid that should have cushioned him had turned acidic, burning his skin even as his transhuman physiology fought to adapt. Warning runes flashed crimson across failing displays: life support critical, structural integrity compromised, psychic dampeners offline.
The pod screamed through the night sky like a dying star, its descent vector wildly off course. Where it should have landed near populated centers, ready to be discovered and revered, it instead plummeted toward the harsh northern mountains. The impact came with the force of an orbital strike.
The earth split. Trees vaporized. A crater thirty meters wide opened in the mountainside as the pod buried itself in rock and soil. Steam hissed from ruptured coolant lines while sparks danced across exposed circuitry. For long moments, nothing moved save the settling dust and debris.
Then, from within the twisted metal, came a sound that would have chilled any listener. An infant's cry, but wrong. Too deep, too powerful, carrying undertones of rage and pain that no child should know.
Small fists, already bearing strength beyond mortal comprehension, punched through weakened hull plating. The metal screamed as it bent outward, and through the gap emerged a figure that defied easy description. A child, yes, but one whose body bore the scars of his violent arrival. Burns traced patterns across bronze skin where the corrupted fluid had eaten at him. One shoulder hung at an wrong angle, the bone already beginning to knit itself back together with sickening pops and grinding sounds.
The infant Primarch, he who would become Angron, pulled himself free and collapsed onto scorched earth. His eyes, which should have held the innocent wonder of youth, instead blazed with preternatural awareness. But there was something else there too, something broken. Where other Primarchs emerged from their pods with minds already beginning to grasp their purpose, this one's thoughts came in fragments, scattered by the psychic damage the Eldar weapons had inflicted.
He could feel everything.
Every creature dying in the forest fire his arrival had sparked. Every predator stalking prey in the mountains. Every slave laboring in the mines of distant Desh'ea, their despair carried on psychic winds he couldn't block out. The emotions crashed into his damaged psyche like hammer blows, each one driving spikes of sympathetic agony through his skull.
The child curled into himself, hands clutching at his head as he tried to shut out the cascade of foreign suffering. But the Eldar's attack had done more than damage his pod; it had torn holes in the psychic barriers that should have protected his developing mind. He was raw, exposed, a nerve stripped of its sheath and left to face the universe's cruelty without filter or defense.
Hours passed. The fires died. The child lay among the cooling wreckage, his body rapidly healing even as his mind struggled to process the overwhelming input. By dawn, when the first scavengers arrived, he appeared physically whole: a bronze-skinned child of perhaps four or five years in appearance, muscled beyond any natural human development.
The slavers came in force, drawn by the pillar of smoke and the hope of salvage. They were hard men, made harder by Nuceria's brutal culture where the strong enslaved the weak and entertainment came from watching men die in the arena. They'd expected to find meteor iron, perhaps, or the wreckage of some off-world vessel.
They found a child and the ruins of technology beyond their comprehension.
"By the Red Sands," whispered Kharen, the expedition's leader, as he stared at the twisted golden metal. "What in the high-riders' names is this?"
"Look at the boy," another slaver said, pointing with his shock-prod. "He's... perfect. No wounds, no burns. How is that possible?"
The child stirred at their approach, and every slaver took an instinctive step back. His eyes opened; not the eyes of a child, but something ancient and terrible forced into too small a form. When he looked at them, each man felt exposed, as if those eyes could see every cruelty they'd ever committed.
"Grab him," Kharen ordered, though his voice shook. "Whatever he is, the arena masters will pay a fortune for him."
The first slaver to approach lasted three seconds. The child moved with speed that defied physics, his small hand closing around the man's wrist. The crack of breaking bone echoed off the crater walls, followed by a scream that cut off as the child's other hand found the slaver's throat.
"Shock-prods!" Kharen roared. "All of them! Now!"
It took twelve men and enough electrical current to drop a mastodon. Even then, the child fought with a fury that seemed to come from somewhere beyond his small frame. He snarled and bit, broke bones and tore flesh, all while tears streamed down his face. Not from pain, but from the overwhelming sensation of feeling his attackers' fear and anger flooding into his broken psyche.
When they finally subdued him, half their number lay groaning on the ground. The child hung limp in the restraints they'd wrapped around him, his body twitching from residual electrical discharge.
"What is he?" one of the surviving slavers asked, cradling a shattered arm.
"Valuable," Kharen replied, staring at the child with a mixture of greed and fear. "That's all that matters. Load him up. And gather what you can of that strange metal; the artificers might make something useful from it."
They dragged him down from the mountains in chains that would have held any normal human. The child walked when he could, was carried when the shocks left him too disoriented to stand. All the while, his mind absorbed the suffering around him: the slaves' despair, the slavers' cruelty, the beasts of burden's dumb agony under their loads.
By the time they reached the outskirts of Desh'ea, the child who would become Angron had learned his first lesson about the universe: it was pain, endless and inescapable, and the only response that made sense was rage.
The slave pits of Desh'ea sprawled like a festering wound on Nuceria's northern plains. Here, beneath the spires where the high-riders lived in decadent luxury, thousands suffered and died for the amusement of their betters. The arena was the heart of it all; a massive colosseum where blood soaked ancient sands and the crowd's roar could be heard for miles.
They brought the child before Oenomaus, master of the gladiator stables. The old trainer had seen everything in his years: giants from the southern wastes, gene-twisted abhuman, even the occasional xenos captured in raids. But the bronze-skinned child made him pause.
"He killed three of my men," Kharen explained, shoving the boy forward. "Broke Darius's arm in six places. Tore out Flavius's throat with his teeth. And he's what, five years old?"
Oenomaus circled the child, noting the perfect musculature, the way he tracked movement despite the shock-collar around his neck, the barely controlled violence in those dark eyes.
"Not natural," the trainer muttered. "But then, the crowd doesn't pay for natural." He grabbed the child's chin, forcing him to make eye contact. What he saw there made him jerk his hand back as if burned. "Yes... he'll do nicely. What's your price?"
As they haggled, the child stood perfectly still. But inside, his damaged psyche writhed under the assault of emotions from the hundreds of slaves packed into the pits around him. Their despair was a physical weight, their pain a symphony he couldn't escape. The rage built like pressure in a volcano, seeking release, demanding action.
When Oenomaus finally grabbed his arm to lead him away, the child spoke for the first time since his pod had crashed. His voice was too deep for his apparent age, carrying harmonics that made nearby slaves whimper.
"It hurts," he said simply.
"Life hurts, boy," Oenomaus replied, not understanding that the child meant something far more profound. "Get used to it. Or die. Those are your choices here."
They gave him a cell barely large enough to lie down in. They fed him scraps that his enhanced metabolism burned through in hours, leaving him constantly hungry. They beat him when he resisted, shocked him when he fought back, tried to break him as they'd broken thousands before.
But you cannot break something already shattered.
In the darkness of his cell, the child who would become Angron pressed his hands against his skull and tried to hold his fracturing mind together. The other slaves' nightmares bled into his own. Their hunger became his hunger. Their rage fed his rage. Every lash that fell on another's back burned across his consciousness.
The Eldar weapons had done their work too well. Where other Primarchs would develop psychic defenses, shields against the universe's cruelty, this one remained eternally open, eternally bleeding. His empathy, which might have made him the most compassionate of the Emperor's sons, instead became a curse that drove him toward madness.
On his first night in the pits, he killed a guard who came to torment him. On the second night, he broke his chains and had to be subdued by a dozen men. By the end of his first week, even the most hardened killers in the stable gave him a wide berth.
They called him the Red Child, for the blood that always seemed to coat his hands. But in the darkest hours before dawn, when the pits fell silent save for the moans of the dying, sometimes they could hear him crying. A sound that reminded them he was, despite everything, still just a child.
A child who felt too much. A child whose mind had been wounded before he could learn to defend it. A child whose only shield against the universe's suffering was the rage that would one day consume him.
In the shadows of Desh'ea, the Red Child grew, and with him grew a fury that would shake the galaxy.
Or would it………….?
The sand scorched beneath the twin suns of Nuceria, each grain a tiny mirror reflecting the blood that had soaked into it over centuries. Angron stood in the center of the arena, his bronze skin glistening with sweat and gore, chest heaving as he tried to shut out the psychic cacophony that threatened to split his skull.
Seven years. Seven years since they'd dragged him from the mountains, a broken child with a broken mind. Now, at twelve years of age by appearance, he stood nearly seven feet tall, his Primarch physiology having accelerated his growth far beyond natural limits. Muscle corded his frame like iron cables, and his movements carried the lethal grace of a born killer.
But inside, he was drowning.
"ANGRON! ANGRON! ANGRON!"
The crowd's chant hammered at him, fifty thousand voices merged into a singular demand for blood. He could feel their excitement like acid on his skin: the high-riders in their silk-draped boxes, drunk on wine and violence; the common citizens, escaping their own miseries by watching others suffer; even the slaves forced to attend, their fear mingled with desperate hope that today wouldn't be their turn to die.
The gates groaned open across the arena. Five figures emerged, blinking in the harsh light. Angron's enhanced vision picked out every detail: the tremor in the first man's hands, the prayer beads clutched by the second, the way the woman in the center tried to stand tall despite the terror radiating from her like heat from a forge.
"Today's entertainment," boomed the announcer's voice, amplified by vox-speakers, "our undefeated Red Angel faces five condemned rebels! Watch as justice is served upon those who would defy the natural order!"
Rebels. The word tasted like ash. Their only crime had been trying to escape the mines, seeking freedom from chains that had bound their families for generations. Now they stood before him with rusted swords and piecemeal armor, sacrificial offerings to Nuceria's bloodthirsty gods.
The woman stepped forward. She was perhaps thirty, with scars that spoke of years in the deep tunnels. When she raised her sword, Angron saw how her grip remained steady despite her fear.
"I know what you are," she said, her voice carrying across the sand. "I know you feel it. Our fear. Our pain. I'm sorry for what they make you do."
The words hit harder than any blade. Angron's jaw clenched as he fought against the tide of her emotions washing over him. Resignation. Sorrow. And underneath it all, a terrible understanding. She knew she was going to die. They all did. But she faced it with a dignity that made his chest constrict.
"Begin!" the announcer roared.
The crowd bayed for blood, their anticipation a physical pressure against Angron's consciousness. He took a step forward, and the rebels spread out in a loose semicircle. They'd discussed tactics, he realized. They knew they couldn't win, but they'd try to make him work for it, to give the crowd a show that might spare their families from reprisal.
The first man charged with a desperate war cry. Angron moved without thinking, his body responding with ingrained movement. He sidestepped the clumsy thrust, his hand closing around the man's wrist. The bone snapped like dry wood.
But as the rebel screamed, Angron felt it all: the white-hot agony of shattered bone, the despair of knowing death was moments away, the flash of memory. A daughter's face, a promise to return that would never be kept.
"I'm sorry," Angron whispered, though his words were lost in the crowd's roar. His other hand found the man's neck, and with a quick twist, he granted the mercy of a swift end.
The psychic backlash hit immediately. The rebel's final moments flooded through Angron's damaged barriers: Maria, forgive me, I tried, I tried, I—
Darkness. Then nothing.
Angron staggered, his vision blurring as he fought to separate his own consciousness from the dead man's fading echoes. But there was no time. The others were moving, driven by desperation and the knowledge that hesitation meant death.
The woman with dignity attacked next, her blade work speaking of actual training. She'd been a soldier once, before the mines claimed her. Angron parried her strikes, his superhuman speed making mockery of her skill. But he could feel her resolve, her determination to die well, to show the high-riders that their victims had honor they could never understand.
When his fist connected with her temple, dropping her to the sand, her last thought seared through him: At least it's quick. At least it's him and not the beasts.
The remaining three came at once. Angron moved among them like a bronze hurricane, each strike precise, each death as swift as he could make it. But with each life he took, their final moments became his. Their fears, their regrets, their desperate loves; all of it poured into his already fractured psyche.
The last rebel, barely more than a boy, tried to run. The crowd jeered and laughed. Angron caught him at the arena's edge, one hand on his shoulder.
"Please," the boy sobbed. "Please, I don't want to—"
"I know," Angron said, and meant it. He could feel the boy's terror as if it were his own, could taste the salt of tears he wasn't crying. "Close your eyes."
The boy obeyed. The end was instant.
As the final body fell, the crowd erupted. Flowers and coins rained down from the stands, tributes to their champion. Angron stood among the corpses, his massive frame trembling not with exertion but with the effort of containing five death-echoes that ricocheted through his skull.
"MAGNIFICENT!" the announcer bellowed. "Five rebels dispatched in under three minutes! Truly, the Red Angel is blessed by the gods of war!"
Angron raised his arms in the victory salute they'd beaten into him, his face a mask that hid the screaming inside his head. The crowd's adulation washed over him like sewage, their bloodlust and satisfaction making his stomach turn.
He was allowed to leave the sand then, trudging through the gladiator's gate while slaves rushed out to clear away the bodies. The moment he passed into the shadows of the tunnel, his legs gave out. He crashed to his knees, hands clutching his skull as the death-echoes reached a crescendo.
"Easy, brother."
The voice cut through the psychic storm like a blade of calm. Angron looked up to see Oenomaus. Not the master who'd bought him, but another slave who'd claimed the name in defiance. This Oenomaus was a giant of a man, scarred from countless battles, with eyes that held a kindness that should have been beaten out of him years ago.
"Here." Oenomaus pressed a water skin into Angron's hands. "Drink. It helps, sometimes."
Angron drank, though they both knew water couldn't wash away what plagued him. Around them, other gladiators gave them space. They'd learned that approaching Angron in the aftermath of a killing was dangerous; his control grew thinner with each death, and more than one slave had been hurt by his unfocused rage.
But Oenomaus had never shown fear. The older gladiator settled beside him, his presence a steady anchor in the psychic storm.
"How many today?" Oenomaus asked quietly.
"Five." Angron's voice came out raw. "Rebels. They just wanted to be free."
"We all want to be free, brother. But wanting doesn't make it so."
"I felt them die." The words tumbled out before Angron could stop them. "I felt everything. The woman; she had a sister in the mines. The boy was only fourteen. He liked to carve wooden birds when the overseers weren't watching. I know because I felt it all when I—" His voice broke.
Oenomaus said nothing, just sat with him in the darkness. That was what Angron treasured most about the man. He never tried to offer empty platitudes or false hope. He simply existed, a pillar of calm in the chaos.
Footsteps echoed down the tunnel. Both gladiators tensed, but it was only Khârnus, another of their brotherhood. Where Oenomaus was calm, Khârnus was fire; a warrior who channeled his rage into every battle, who'd survived five years in the arena through sheer determination and skill.
"The high-riders demand an encore," Khârnus spat. "They want to see their Red Angel face the Beast of Syrgos."
Angron's head snapped up. The Beast was what they called Gorthak, a gene-bulked monstrosity who'd killed forty gladiators in the last year alone. But that wasn't what made Angron's jaw clench.
"He's one of us," Angron said.
"Not anymore," Khârnus replied bitterly. "The cocktail of growth hormones and combat stims they pump into him has burned away whatever humanity he had. He's just rage and muscle now."
But Angron knew better. His broken psychic abilities could sense the truth. Somewhere beneath the chemical fury and enhanced aggression, Gorthak's original personality remained, screaming in a prison of his own flesh.
"I won't do it," Angron said.
Oenomaus and Khârnus exchanged glances. Refusing to fight meant punishment. Not just for Angron, but for all of them. The high-riders had learned that the Red Angel, for all his rage, formed bonds with other gladiators. They used those bonds like chains, ensuring compliance through threatened suffering of others.
"You have to," Oenomaus said gently. "If you don't, they'll make examples. You know they will."
Angron did know. The memory of the last time he'd refused still haunted him. They'd crucified three gladiators in the practice yard, left them to die slowly while forcing him to watch, to feel every moment of their agony through his cursed empathy.
"I'll make it quick," he said finally, the words like ground glass in his throat.
The walk back to the arena felt like a funeral march. The crowd had grown even larger, word of the special bout spreading through the city. High-riders who rarely attended the games had come to see their champion face the infamous Beast.
Gorthak waited in the center of the arena. He'd once been human, but now stood nine feet tall, his body grotesquely swollen with muscle. Veins like cables pulsed beneath skin stretched too thin. His eyes were red-rimmed and wild, foam flecking his lips as combat drugs coursed through his system.
But Angron saw deeper. Beneath the bestial exterior, he felt the faint psychic echo of the man Gorthak had been: Valen, a farmer who'd killed an overseer for beating his son. They'd turned him into this as punishment, a warning to others who might think of resistance.
"Release the Beast!" the announcer commanded.
Gorthak charged with a roar that shook the arena walls. Angron met him head-on, their collision sending shockwaves through the sand. They grappled like primordial titans, strength against strength.
But where Gorthak had only chemically enhanced muscle, Angron had the genetic legacy of a Primarch. Slowly, inexorably, he gained the advantage. His hands found Gorthak's throat, began to squeeze.
And then the psychic connection fully opened.
Angron gasped as Gorthak's fractured consciousness flooded into his own. The pain was indescribable. Years of torment, of fighting against the drugs that compelled him to kill, of watching his own hands tear apart men he'd called friends. And underneath it all, a desperate plea: End it. Please. Let me die as Valen, not as this thing they made me.
Tears streamed down Angron's face as he tightened his grip. The crowd, thinking them tears of effort, cheered louder.
"I'm sorry, Valen," Angron whispered. "Be at peace."
He felt the moment Valen's spirit broke free from its tortured shell, felt the profound relief as death claimed him. But he also felt everything else. Every moment of agony, every forced transformation, every death Gorthak had been compelled to cause.
When Angron finally released the corpse and stood, something had changed in his eyes. The rage was still there, but it had crystallized into something harder, colder. The crowd's cheers sounded like mockery now. The high-riders' laughter was the cackle of carrion birds.
He looked up at the box where the city's lords sat in their finery, and for the first time, his rage had a true target. Not the slaves forced to fight. Not the gladiators who did what they must to survive. But those who created this system, who fed on suffering like vampires.
"One day," he said, too quietly for any but his enhanced hearing to detect. "One day, I'll stand in this arena again. And it won't be slaves who die."
A reckoning. One day.
The first sign of trouble came during a routine execution match.
Angron stood over a fallen gladiator, a man who'd tried to strangle his overseer with his own chains. The crowd bayed for blood, but Angron hesitated. Through his broken psychic barriers, he felt the man's desperation, his years of accumulated suffering, the final indignity that had driven him to suicidal rebellion.
"Kill him!" someone shouted from the stands. "What are you waiting for?"
Angron raised his blade, then lowered it. He couldn't. Not this time. Not when he could feel the man's heart beating in terrified sympathy with his own.
"Please," the gladiator whispered. "My daughter... they have my daughter..."
Something shifted in Angron's mind. The constant psychic pressure that had tortured him for years suddenly reversed, flowing outward instead of in. Without conscious thought, he reached down and pulled the man to his feet.
"Stand," Angron commanded, his voice carrying harmonics that resonated in the bones of every slave in the arena. "You are more than this."
The gladiator straightened, tears streaming down his scarred face. But something else kindled in his eyes: a spark that had been extinguished years ago. Hope.
The crowd fell silent. In the gladiator pits, in the slave sections, in the darkest corners where the broken huddled, people felt it. A warmth spreading from the arena's heart, touching minds numbed by despair. For one impossible moment, they remembered what it felt like to believe things could change.
High-Rider Mascius shot to his feet in the royal box, his wine cup clattering across marble. "What is this?" He turned to his advisors, face purple with rage. "What is he doing?"
The arena's sand began to tremble. Not from any physical force, but from the psychic resonance of thousands of enslaved minds suddenly, simultaneously, considering a single thought: What if we didn't have to live like this?
"ENOUGH!" Mascius roared into the vox-caster. "Guards! Shock-prods! Subdue the Red Angel immediately!"
But as the guards rushed onto the sand, something extraordinary happened. The gladiators in the holding cells began to move. Not in panic or fear, but with purpose. They pressed against their bars, reaching toward Angron, drawn by the psychic warmth he radiated.
"Brother," they whispered. "Brother, we feel you."
Angron gasped as their hope flooded into him. Not as pain this time, but as strength. His empathic curse had inverted, becoming a two-way channel. He could take their suffering into himself, yes, but he could also give something back. His own rage, his own strength, his own unbroken will despite everything they'd done to him.
The first shock-prod struck him between the shoulder blades. Electricity coursed through his body, but instead of dropping him, it seemed to amplify the psychic field. Every slave touched by his emanation jerked as if shocked themselves, but rather than pain, they felt power.
"No," Mascius breathed, watching his carefully ordered world begin to crack. "No, this is not possible."
More guards flooded the arena. It took twenty men and enough voltage to power a city block, but they finally brought Angron down. As he collapsed, the psychic field collapsed with him, leaving thousands of slaves blinking in confusion, wondering what they'd just experienced.
But the damage was done. In the space of minutes, Angron had shown them something the high-riders had spent generations trying to kill: the possibility of resistance.
They dragged him not to his cell but to the depths beneath the arena, to chambers that existed in no official record. Here, the high-riders kept their darkest secrets, their most forbidden technologies.
Angron woke strapped to a metal table, his limbs secured with adamantine restraints that even his Primarch strength couldn't break. The room stank of old blood and ozone. Archeotech devices lined the walls, their purposes lost to time but their menace unmistakable.
"Ah, you're awake."
The voice belonged to Surgeon-Magos Vect, a creature more machine than man who served the high-riders' darkest needs. He scuttled forward on mechanical legs, various surgical implements extending from his augmetic arms.
"Do you know what you've done?" Vect asked, tilting his head at an unnatural angle. "You've threatened the very foundation of Nucerian society. One moment of... whatever that was... and slaves across the city are whispering. Hoping. That cannot be allowed."
Angron tested his restraints again, muscles bulging with effort. "They deserve hope. They deserve..."
"They deserve nothing!" High-Rider Mascius entered the chamber, flanked by guards. "They exist to serve, to bleed for our entertainment, to know their place. And you... you would undo centuries of order with your unnatural abilities."
"My lord," Vect interjected, "the solution we discussed..."
"Yes." Mascius approached the table, studying Angron like a specimen. "We cannot kill you. You're too valuable, too popular with the crowds. But we can... modify you. Make you safe."
Vect produced a device that made Angron's enhanced vision swim. It looked like a crown of nails, but wrong, twisted, with neural interfaces that seemed to writhe with their own malevolence. The metal was dark, drinking in light, and covered in symbols that hurt to perceive directly.
"The Butcher's Nails," Vect said reverently. "Archeotech from the Dark Age, found in the deepest vaults. Designed to create the perfect warrior by amplifying aggression while suppressing... unnecessary functions."
"No." Angron began to thrash against his restraints, understanding flooding through him. "No, you can't..."
"Oh, but we can." Mascius leaned closer, his breath reeking of wine and cruelty. "We'll take that bleeding heart of yours and replace it with pure rage. No more empathy. No more inspiration. Just violence, clean and simple."
"Please." The word tore from Angron's throat, his pride meaningless against what they threatened. "Please, don't do this. I'll fight. I'll kill whoever you want. Just don't..."
"Too late for bargaining." Mascius nodded to Vect. "Begin."
The Surgeon-Magos activated restraint fields that paralyzed Angron from the neck down. He could only watch as mechanical arms descended, bearing bone drills and neural probes. Vect hummed tunelessly as he worked, marking insertion points across Angron's skull.
"The beauty of the Nails," Vect explained conversationally, "is that they don't simply suppress. They redirect. All that compassion, all that empathy; it will still be there. But it will be transformed into rage. Every kind impulse will become a need for violence. Every moment of peace will bring agony until you kill again."
The first drill bit into Angron's skull. The pain was indescribable, not just physical but existential. He felt the foreign technology beginning to interface with his neural pathways, ancient malevolent code rewriting the very structure of his thoughts.
"No," he gasped, tears streaming down his face. "No, I am not... I am not just..."
"You are what we make you," Mascius said coldly. "Nothing more."
The Nails went in one by one, each a violation beyond description. Angron felt his psychic abilities twist and scream as the archeotech attacked them, trying to cage them, redirect them. His empathy, his curse and gift, fought back with desperate strength.
But the Nails were designed by the Dark Age's greatest monsters, built to break transhuman minds. Slowly, inexorably, they burrowed deeper.
Angron's perspective fractured. He could feel his own thoughts being herded, corralled, forced down pathways of aggression. The part of him that had pulled up the fallen gladiator screamed as it was caged. The warmth he'd shared with the slaves curdled into heat that demanded release through violence.
No, he thought desperately. I am Angron. I am... I am...
But who was he? The Nails made it hard to remember. Easier to focus on the rage. Easier to let the pain transform into hatred for everything that lived, everything that didn't suffer as he suffered.
"Fighting it," Vect noted clinically. "Fascinating. His neural structure is far more complex than baseline human. The Nails are having to work harder to establish dominance."
"Then make them work harder," Mascius commanded.
Vect adjusted something, and Angron's world exploded into red. The careful barriers he'd built in his mind, the techniques he'd developed to separate his consciousness from others, all of it shattered. But instead of the usual flood of external emotions, there was only his own pain, reflected and amplified infinitely by the Nails.
He screamed, and somewhere in the depths of the arena, every slave shuddered as they felt their last hope being murdered.
The procedure took hours. By the end, Angron hung limp in his restraints, consciousness flickering. The Nails protruded from his skull like a crown of thorns, occasionally sparking with dark energy. Blood ran down his face in crimson streams.
"Is it done?" Mascius asked.
Vect consulted his readings. "The integration is... unusual. His unique physiology is creating unexpected interactions. But yes, the primary function is established. Aggression enhanced. Higher functions suppressed. Empathic abilities..." He paused. "Redirected, as intended."
"Wake him."
Stimulants flooded Angron's system. His eyes snapped open, and Mascius stepped back involuntarily. Those eyes, once windows to a soul that felt too much, now burned with mindless fury.
"How do you feel?" Vect asked, professional curiosity overcoming caution.
Angron's mouth worked soundlessly for a moment. When he finally spoke, his voice was different. Flatter. Broken.
"It hurts," he said. "Everything hurts. Make it stop."
"Oh, we will," Mascius smiled coldly. "Every time you kill, the pain will lessen. For a while. But it will always come back, worse than before. The only relief is violence. The only peace is in dealing death."
They released his restraints. Angron sat up slowly, one hand going to his head, fingers tracing the protruding Nails. The gesture was almost gentle, at odds with the rage radiating from every line of his body.
"I remember," he said quietly. "I remember feeling them. The slaves. Their hope." His voice cracked. "I remember wanting to help them."
"But you don't feel it now, do you?" Mascius pressed. "You don't feel their suffering?"
Angron tilted his head, and for a moment, something almost like his old self flickered in his eyes. "I feel it," he whispered. "I feel it all. But now..." His hands clenched into fists. "Now it just makes me want to kill everything. To make the whole world hurt like I hurt."
"Perfect." Mascius turned to his guards. "Return him to his cell. Tomorrow, he fights again. And this time, there will be no hesitation. No mercy. Only the Red Angel we've created."
As they led him away, Angron stumbled, his enhanced physiology struggling to adapt to the foreign technology literally nailed into his brain. Each step brought fresh agony as the Nails sent pulses of aggression through his neural pathways, demanding violence, demanding blood.
In his cell, he collapsed against the wall, hands pressed to his skull. The other gladiators approached cautiously, sensing the change in their champion.
"Brother?" Oenomaus called softly. "What have they done to you?"
Angron looked up, and Oenomaus flinched. The warmth was gone from those eyes, replaced by something that made even hardened killers step back.
"They killed me," Angron said simply. "But they left my corpse walking." He laughed, a sound like breaking glass. "I can still feel you all. Every hurt. Every fear. But now it doesn't make me want to help. It makes me want to..." He trailed off, shuddering as the Nails sent another pulse of demanded violence through his skull.
"Fight it," Khârnus urged. "You're stronger than their technology. You're..."
"I'm nothing!" Angron roared, surging to his feet. For a moment, it seemed he might attack his only friends. Then, with visible effort, he forced himself back. "I'm nothing but what they made me. A weapon. A monster. The Red Angel of death."
He slumped back down, the brief surge of rage leaving him drained. "Stay away from me," he whispered. "All of you. The Nails... they want me to hurt you. And soon, I won't be strong enough to resist."
But the gladiators didn't leave. They sat with him in silent vigil as their brother fought a battle no sword could win; a war against his own rewritten mind, against technology designed to murder the soul while leaving the body intact.
Outside, in the streets of Desh'ea, slaves whispered about what they'd felt in the arena. That moment of warmth, of shared strength, of hope. They didn't understand what had happened to their champion, but they remembered.
And in the darkness of his cell, Angron wept tears of blood as the Butcher's Nails hummed their song of violence, drowning out the man he could have been with the monster he was forced to become.
The morning came too soon, dragged into existence by the screaming in Angron's skull. The Butcher's Nails had not let him sleep. Every time his eyes closed, they sent fresh spikes of agony through his brain, demanding violence, demanding blood. He lay curled on his cell floor, fingers clawing at the stone as if he could dig his way free from his own head.
"Up, Red Angel." The guard's voice grated like rusted metal. "Time to earn your keep."
Angron forced himself to stand, every movement sending new waves of pain through the neural interfaces. The Nails hummed their discordant song, turning even the simple act of breathing into an exercise in restraint. He wanted to tear the guard's throat out. He wanted to paint the walls with blood. He wanted...
No. He pressed his palms against his temples, trying to hold onto some fragment of who he'd been. I am not this. I am not just this.
But the Nails whispered otherwise.
They led him through the tunnels, past cells where other gladiators pressed against their bars. Some reached out to him; the slaves who'd felt his warmth just yesterday, who still hoped their champion might somehow break free. Others, the career killers and purchased fighters, shrank back. They recognized the change in him, the way his muscles tensed with barely leashed violence, the way his eyes tracked every movement like a predator sizing up prey.
"Special match today," the guard said, voice carefully neutral. He'd seen what Angron had become and wanted no part of triggering it. "The high-riders want to see their investment pay off."
The arena tunnel opened before them, sunlight streaming in like an accusation. The crowd's roar hit Angron like a physical blow, their bloodlust mixing with the Nails' demands until he couldn't tell where one ended and the other began.
But it was the sight in the arena's center that made him stumble.
Six figures huddled together on the sand. Not rebels. Not trained fighters. Just slaves; house slaves from their thin builds and fearful postures. An old man who looked like he'd spent his life in the kitchens. A woman barely out of childhood. A boy who couldn't have been more than twelve.
They'd been given weapons: rusted daggers and broken spears that looked absurd in their trembling hands. One of them, a middle-aged man with the soft look of a scribe, had already dropped his blade and fallen to his knees.
"No," Angron breathed. The word came out wrong, distorted by the rage building in his chest. "No, not them. They're not fighters. They're not..."
The Nails activated.
It wasn't like before, wasn't the constant background agony he'd endured through the night. This was different. This was purpose. Every neuron in his brain fired at once, flooding him with artificial rage so pure it burned away thought. His vision went red at the edges, then crimson, then deeper still until the world became nothing but targets and the need to make them stop existing.
He didn't remember entering the arena. One moment he stood in the tunnel; the next, he was among them.
The old man died first, though Angron wouldn't remember how. His conscious mind drowned beneath the tsunami of the Nails' fury, reduced to a passenger in his own body. There was a wet sound, a spray of warmth across his face, and then he was turning to the next target.
The woman tried to run. The Nails found that amusing. Prey that fled was prey that prolonged the hunt, prolonged the blessed relief from pain that came with killing. Angron caught her in three strides, his hand closing around her throat. Some distant part of him felt her terror, felt the way her psychic death-scream should have torn at his empathy.
But the Nails took that empathy and twisted it, transformed it into fuel for greater violence. Her fear didn't make him want to stop; it made him want to tear the world apart so nothing would ever feel fear again.
The boy with the spear tried to defend himself, some instinct driving him to raise the broken weapon. Angron didn't slow. The spear shattered against his chest, and then the boy shattered too, reduced to components the Nails didn't care to catalog.
But the rage wasn't satisfied. The assigned targets were gone, but the pain hadn't stopped. If anything, it had grown worse, the Nails demanding more, always more.
Angron turned to the crowd.
The first row of spectators had just enough time to scream before he vaulted the arena wall. His hands found a merchant's throat, twisted, discarded. A noble woman in silk tried to flee; he caught her by her jeweled hair and introduced her skull to the stone steps.
Guards rushed in, shock-prods crackling. The Nails laughed. More targets, more violence, more blessed moments where the pain transformed into purpose. Angron moved through them like a hurricane through wheat, leaving broken bodies and spreading panic.
A guard's shock-prod found his ribs. The electricity that should have dropped him only fed the Nails' fury. He grabbed the weapon, turned it on its wielder, held it against the man's head until the screaming stopped and the smell of cooked meat filled the air.
More guards. More spectators caught in the crush. The high-riders in their box screaming orders that no one could hear over the chaos. Angron killed without thought, without purpose beyond the Nails' demands. Each death brought a microsecond of relief before the pain crashed back worse than before, demanding another life, another spray of blood.
He didn't know how long it lasted. Time meant nothing when the Nails sang their song. But eventually, inevitably, his body reached its limits. Even a Primarch's physiology couldn't maintain that level of violence indefinitely.
Angron collapsed in the arena's center, surrounded by a charnel house of his own making. The Nails' active phase ended as suddenly as it had begun, leaving him gasping on blood-soaked sand as his conscious mind struggled to process what had happened.
The silence was deafening. Then, from the high-riders' box, came the sound of slow applause.
"Magnificent," Mascius called down, his voice carrying clearly in the shocked quiet. "Absolutely magnificent. Did you see how he moved? How efficiently he killed? Worth every moment of the procedure."
Angron pushed himself up on trembling arms, his vision clearing. The first thing he saw was the old man, or what remained of him. Kitchen slaves weren't meant to die in arenas. They were meant to die of age, surrounded by the small families they'd built in the shadows of their servitude.
"No," he whispered, crawling toward the corpse. His hands, still slick with blood, tried to put back together what the Nails had torn apart. "No, I didn't mean... I couldn't stop..."
The woman lay nearby, her eyes still open, still showing the terror of her final moments. Angron gathered her body to his chest, his massive frame shaking with sobs that the Nails tried to transform back into rage.
"I'm sorry," he gasped, rocking back and forth. "I'm sorry, I couldn't... they made me... I couldn't..."
But that was a lie, wasn't it? He'd felt himself doing it. Some part of him had been present for every kill, trapped behind the Nails' fury but still aware. Still him, just twisted into something monstrous.
The guards approached cautiously, shock-prods ready. But Angron didn't resist as they surrounded him. He knelt among the bodies of innocents, cradling them like broken dolls, his tears mixing with their blood.
"Take him below," someone ordered. "Let him calm down before the next bout."
They dragged him away, past the cells where gladiators watched in silence. The purchased fighters, the career killers, they pressed themselves against the back walls of their cells, animal fear in their eyes. They'd seen berserkers before, men who lost themselves in battle fury. But this was different. This was madness given purpose, compassion transformed into butchery.
But in the slaves' cells, in the quarters where the condemned waited for their turn on the sand, the reaction was different. They didn't shrink away. They stood at their bars, tears streaming down scarred faces.
"We saw," one of them whispered as Angron passed. "We saw them activate it. We know what they did to you."
"Not your fault, brother," another added, reaching through the bars with a shaking hand. "Not your fault what they made you into."
Angron flinched away from their compassion. He didn't deserve it. Not after what he'd done. The Nails tried to twist their sympathy into rage, but he was too exhausted, too broken to give them what they wanted.
They threw him into his cell, where he collapsed against the far wall. Oenomaus and Khârnus waited outside, having watched everything from the gladiators' viewing area.
"Brother," Oenomaus started.
"Don't." Angron's voice was raw, hollow. "Don't call me that. Brothers don't... brothers don't do what I did."
"The Nails did it," Khârnus said firmly. "We saw the moment they activated. You weren't yourself."
"But I was." Angron looked up, and both men stepped back at what they saw in his eyes. Not rage now, but something worse: understanding. "I was there for all of it. Trapped inside, but there. I felt them die, felt their fear, and the Nails took that feeling and made it into..." He shuddered. "They made my empathy into a weapon against me. Every emotion I feel becomes rage. Every moment of compassion transforms into violence."
He held up his hands, still caked with drying blood. "They didn't just change how I fight. They murdered who I was and left this thing wearing my face."
"You're still Angron," Oenomaus insisted. "Still our..."
"No!" The word came out as a roar, and the Nails sparked eagerly, trying to build on that anger. Angron bit down on his own tongue until he tasted blood, using the pain to center himself. "Angron died on that table. What's left is just the Red Angel. The monster they wanted."
He turned away from them, curling into himself in the corner of his cell. "Leave me. Both of you. Before the Nails decide you're threats that need removing."
They didn't leave. Not immediately. But eventually, the weight of his silence drove them away. Angron listened to their footsteps fade, then pressed his forehead against the cold stone.
In the darkness, he could still see their faces. The old man. The woman. The boy with his useless spear. He'd killed before: rivals in the arena, would-be champions, rebels and criminals. But never like this. Never without purpose, never without at least the fiction that they'd chosen to face him. Never without mercy.
The Red Angel wept.
The weeks blurred together like blood in water.
Angron lost count of how many times they'd dragged him to the sand. Lost count of the bodies. Lost count of the moments he'd come back to himself, the Nails' active fury receding like a tide to reveal the wreckage left behind. Each time was the same: confusion, horror, then the crushing weight of what he'd done as he cradled whoever they'd thrown against him this time.
Today's victims had been three women accused of stealing bread. Yesterday, a man who'd fallen asleep during his shift. Before that, children who'd tried to run. Always the weak, always the defenseless, always those whose only crime was existing under the high-riders' boots.
Now he writhed on his cell floor, fingers clawing grooves in the stone as the Nails punished him for the cardinal sin of not actively killing. The pain came in waves, each worse than the last. White-hot needles through his temples. Electric fire along every nerve. His enhanced physiology, which should have been his greatest strength, only meant he could endure agony that would kill a normal man in seconds.
"Please," he gasped to the darkness, though he didn't know who he was begging. The Nails? The high-riders? Whatever gods might listen to a monster's prayers? "Please, just let me die. Let it end."
But death wouldn't come. The Nails wouldn't allow it. They wanted him conscious, aware, suffering until the only relief was to give them what they craved: violence, blood, the destruction of everything that breathed.
Around him, the slave quarters echoed with familiar sounds of misery. A woman keening for a son taken to the arena last week. A man's broken muttering as he relived watching his daughter sold to a pleasure house. The thin, reedy crying of an infant born into chains, who would likely die in them.
Their suffering should have been distant to him now. The Nails should have transformed it all into rage, into fuel for the next massacre. But somehow, impossibly, he still felt it. Felt it all, like salt ground into an open wound. The empathy the Butcher's Nails had tried to murder clung to life in some deep part of him, making everything worse. He couldn't help them. Could only hurt them. Would hurt them, the next time the Nails sang their song.
"Stay back," he rasped as he heard movement outside his cell. "Stay away. Not safe. Never safe."
But the footsteps came closer. Small footsteps. Light.
Through pain-blurred vision, Angron saw a child approach his cell. A boy, perhaps eight years old, with the hollow cheeks and too-bright eyes of the perpetually hungry. Lash marks decorated his arms; punishment for some minor infraction, or perhaps just because an overseer had been bored.
"No," Angron tried to rise, to put distance between himself and the child, but the Nails sent another spike of agony through his skull that dropped him back to his knees. "Get back. Run. The Nails, they'll make me—"
The boy slipped between the bars. He was small enough, malnourished enough, that the gaps meant to prevent adult escape posed no obstacle. Before Angron could react, small arms wrapped around his massive frame.
"Hurts," the boy whispered. "Know it hurts. Hurts for us too."
The contact was electric. Not because the Nails reacted; they seemed almost confused by the gesture, uncertain how to transform a child's embrace into violence. But because Angron felt the boy's pain, his fear, his desperate need for comfort, and somehow it didn't make him want to kill. It made him want to protect.
"Please," Angron whispered, though his arms remained at his sides, trembling with the effort of not responding. "Please, I don't want to hurt you."
"Won't," the boy said with the certainty only children could manage. "You save us. In arena. We remember."
Before Angron could process that, more movement. A girl this time, maybe six, clutching a doll made of rags and straw. Whip marks crisscrossed her back, visible through her torn shift. She squeezed through the bars and wrapped her thin arms around Angron's head, careful of the protruding Nails.
"Shh," she whispered, as if comforting a wounded animal. "Shh. Not your fault. We know. We know."
The Nails screamed, trying to transform the children's touch into threat, their compassion into attack. But they were children. Small, weak, defenseless. Everything in Angron's twisted psyche recognized them as things to protect, not destroy. The conflict sent new types of pain through his skull, but he endured it, afraid to move, afraid to breathe too hard lest he hurt them.
More children came. They flowed between the bars like water, surrounding him with small bodies and smaller hands. Some sang soft songs their mothers had taught them. Others simply held on, sharing warmth, sharing presence.
Then the adults began to arrive.
They couldn't fit through the bars, but they pressed against them, reaching through. A mother whose eyes held the hollow look of loss. A father whose hands shook from years of labor and abuse. Young men and women who'd been born in chains and expected to die in them.
"We see you, Red Angel," an old woman whispered. Her face was a map of scars, her hands gnarled from decades of work. "We see what they done to you. What they make you do. But we also 'member what you tried to do for us. That moment in the arena when you made us all feel... hope."
"Don't," Angron choked out, tears streaming down his face. "Don't waste hope on me. I'm broken. I'm..."
"We all broken," a young man interrupted. His left arm ended at the elbow; punishment for dropping a tray in the high-riders' hall. "Don't mean we not worth saving."
They began to sing. Not loudly; that would bring guards. But soft, low voices joining in an old song. A lullaby, maybe, or a work song, or perhaps something that was both. The words spoke of better times that had never existed, of freedom that seemed impossible, of love that persisted despite every attempt to beat it out of them.
The children pressed closer, and Angron found his arms moving of their own accord. Not with violence, but with desperate, aching care. He gathered them to him, this Primarch engineered for war, holding broken children like the most precious treasure in the galaxy.
The Nails... quieted.
Not silenced; they could never be truly silenced. But faced with this outpouring of genuine human connection, of love given freely despite every reason to fear, they seemed to falter. The agony reduced to a dull throb. Still there, still waiting, but no longer all-consuming.
"How?" Angron whispered, looking up at the adults pressed against his cell. "How can you... after everything I've done..."
"Because you one of us," a woman said simply. She'd lost three sons to the arena over the years. "They hurt you to hurt all of us. Every time they make you kill, they showing us what happens to hope. But we see past what they make you do. We see who you trying to be."
A man with premature gray in his hair nodded. "My daughter was in the arena last week. You... the Nails made you..." He stopped, swallowed hard. "But I saw your face after. Saw you hold her. Saw you weep. Monsters don't weep for slaves they kill."
The song continued, voices joining from cells throughout the block. Guards would come soon, Angron knew. They always did when slaves showed any sign of solidarity. But for now, for this moment, there was peace.
And in that peace, something crystallized in Angron's mind.
He looked at the children in his arms, at the adults surrounding his cell, at the sea of broken people who had chosen to show him compassion when the world had shown them none. The Nails tried to twist the feeling rising in his chest, tried to transform it into rage, but they couldn't quite manage it. Because this wasn't just emotion. This was purpose.
"I swear," he said, his voice low but carrying to every ear. "I swear by the blood they've made me spill, by every innocent life taken, by every child broken on their wheels of cruelty."
He stood, children still clinging to him, and his presence seemed to fill the cell. Not with menace, but with something else. Something the slaves recognized from that day in the arena before the Nails: the presence of someone who could lead, who could protect, who could fight for something greater than survival.
"You will not live and die as slaves," Angron continued, meeting the eyes of everyone he could see. "I will lead you to freedom or die trying. And I promise you this: for every cruelty inflicted, for every child broken, for every life destroyed for their entertainment, the high-riders will pay. They think they've made me into their Red Angel of death. They're right. But not in the way they think."
He gently set down the children, though they immediately pressed back against him. "They wanted a monster. They've got one. But this monster remembers what they've done to all of us. This monster knows their names, their faces, their crimes. And when the time comes, and it will come, they'll learn what it means to face not just the Red Angel, but the fury of every slave who's ever suffered under their rule. This I swear!"
On That day, Angron, the sword of Vengeance, was born.
Comments
LT Butterfly287
Didn't you make one of his choices before going into Warhammer that Angron never revices the nails? Also this chapter was frankly completey unecessary.
Kyle Pemberton
Not a fan of this chapter at all. One, we already know Angron's story so replaying it like this felt gratuitous. Two, the whole point of his quest is that he should be intervening to stop him being implanted with the nails. Also 7 years seems plenty of time for the MC to reach Angron with what you've described from his POV.
