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Return Of the Elden Lord 20
🕑 Added 2025-11-18 12:39:09 +0000 UTCThe first of the Northern lords arrived at Winterfell on a grey morning, Lord Wyman Manderly's wheelhouse groaning under his considerable weight as it rolled through the gates. Within three weeks, the castle overflowed with banners. The merman of White Harbor, the giant of House Umber, the sunburst of Karstark, the bear of Mormont, the fist of Glover. Dozens of minor houses filled every corner, their men-at-arms camping in hastily erected tent cities that sprawled across the fields like a second Winterfell made of canvas and rope.
Jon watched from the high windows of Raya Lucaria's astronomy tower, the enchanted glass showing him every detail despite the distance between realms. Twenty-five thousand men. The largest Northern gathering in living memory, perhaps since the last King in the North bent the knee. They sharpened swords, fletched arrows, drilled formations in the mud. The sound of hammers on anvils rang day and night as smiths worked themselves to exhaustion.
"You could end this with a thought," Ranni said from behind him, her blue fingers tracing patterns in the air that left trails of frost. "Why let them gather armies like children playing at war?"
"Because they need to remember they can fight." Jon didn't turn from the window. "If I solve every problem, what happens when I'm gone?"
"You won't be gone," Marika said from her seat by the fireplace, golden light emanating from her skin. "We are eternal now, beloved."
"Nothing is eternal." Jon's reflection in the glass showed eyes that burned silver. "I learned that killing gods."
In Winterfell's Great Hall below, Robb stood at the head of the war table, lords pressed around him like wolves around meat. Jon could hear every word through the connection between realms, though none down there knew he listened.
"The Greatjon says we should march south," Robb was saying, his voice steady despite his youth. "Meet them before they reach Moat Cailin."
"Folly!" Lord Glover slammed his fist on the table. "Let them break themselves against the Neck's defenses. One man can hold that causeway against thousands."
"Aye, if they come by the causeway," Lord Karstark countered. "But zealots don't think like soldiers. They'll come through the swamps if their faith demands it, drowning by the hundreds and calling it holy sacrifice."
The arguments continued, voices rising and falling like tide against stone. But whenever Jon's name came up, silence fell. They knew he watched, somehow. Knew the real power didn't sit at the war table but somewhere beyond their understanding.
A raven arrived as Lord Umber described defensive positions. The maester's face went pale as he read. "My lords... Lord Stark writes from King's Landing."
Robb snatched the parchment. His jaw tightened as he read aloud. "Trapped in Red Keep. Faith Militant controls gates. King Robert powerless, drinks himself to stupor daily. Southern lords refuse Crown summons, claim divine judgment supersedes royal command. Sansa and Arya confined to tower for their protection. Direwolves killed three zealots who tried to drag them to Sept for 'cleansing.' High Septon declares King Robert tainted by association with demon-touched North."
The hall erupted. Lords shouted over each other, some calling for immediate march south, others demanding they fortify and wait. Through it all, Robb stood silent, eyes finding the shadows where he somehow knew Jon listened.
Another raven, this one from the Riverlands. "Eight thousand Faith Militant crossed the Twins four weeks past. Lord Walder took their gold and waved them through with his blessing. They march with Lannister supplies and hedge knight reinforcements."
"Eight thousand?" The Greatjon spat. "We have twenty-five. Let them come."
"Eight thousand fanatics who think death in battle guarantees paradise," Lady Mormont corrected. "While our men fight to live and return home. Which do you think fights harder?"
More ravens throughout the day. Each message darker than the last. Faith Militant burning septs that wouldn't support the crusade. Hedge knights flocking to their banner for promise of Northern gold. Tywin Lannister sending "donations" of weapons and armor, though carefully avoiding official involvement.
Jon finally stood from his window. The wind that shouldn't exist in Raya Lucaria's controlled climate whipped through the tower, carrying the smell of coming snow though autumn had barely begun.
"My lord?" A young sorcerer appeared at the door. "The Academy asks if you'll be attending the evening symposium on gravitational….."
"Tell them no." Jon's voice carried winter's edge. "Prepare the observation platform. I want to see them when they reach the Neck."
In Winterfell's hall, the final raven of the day arrived just as servants lit the torches. The maester's hands shook as he broke the seal.
Robb read it once silently, then again aloud, his voice hollow. "Faith Militant reached the Neck's southern edge two days ago. King Robert forced to sign writ blessing their crusade. They come with Crown's official sanction to destroy the 'Northern demon.'"
The silence that followed was absolute. Every lord in the hall turned to look at the same shadow in the corner, where they all somehow felt Jon's presence despite him being realms away.
"So be it," Lord Manderly said finally, his usual jovial manner replaced with grim determination. "They want a demon? Let them find one."
The Northern host departed Winterfell as dawn broke grey and cold, twenty-five thousand men flowing onto the Kingsroad like a river of steel. Banners cracked in the wind. The grey direwolf of Stark led them all, followed by the merman of Manderly, the giant of Umber, the bear of Mormont. Every sworn house answered the call, from the greatest lords to landed knights with holdings smaller than southern farms.
Robb rode at the vanguard's head, Grey Wind padding alongside his destrier. The young lord wore new-forged mail and carried Ice across his back, though the ancestral blade looked too large for his frame. Lords who'd fought beside his father now looked to him for orders. Some tested him with subtle challenges to his authority. Others, like Greatjon Umber, seemed amused by the "green pup" trying to show teeth.
Jon rode three ranks back with his goddess-wives, and that's where the real unease lived. Soldiers kept stealing glances at the trio. Jon's star-bright eyes unsettled them less than Ranni's blue skin or Marika's golden radiance that never dimmed even in shadow. Horses shied from them. Dogs whimpered. Yet when Jon spoke to the men, asking after their families or commenting on their weapons' care, they answered eagerly. He remembered names, faces, stories they'd told him as boys. That was still their Jon, even if something else lived behind those silver eyes now.
The first night's camp sprawled across frozen fields twelve miles south of Winterfell. Men who'd never served together learned each other's habits. Umber men drank loud and fought louder. Karstark soldiers maintained rigid discipline. The mountain clansmen kept to themselves, suspicious of lowland softness even among other Northerners.
Jon found Robb staring at maps by candlelight in the command tent, struggling with supply calculations.
"You're overthinking it." Jon pulled up a stool. "Four pounds of grain per man per day, two for the horses. Water from streams. Hunt to supplement. The North feeds armies differently than southern hosts."
"Father made it look simple."
"Lord Stark had twenty years of practice. You have days." Jon traced the route south. "What do you see here?"
"The Kingsroad. Open ground until the Neck."
"What else?"
Robb studied the map harder. "Good sight lines. No ambush points. But also no cover if they have outriders this far north."
"Good. Now look here." Jon pointed to a position forty miles ahead. "What would you do if you were them?"
They worked through scenarios until midnight. Outside, Marika and Ranni walked among the campfires. Soldiers initially scrambled away from the goddesses, but curiosity won over fear. Marika healed a man's infected wound with golden light. Ranni showed young soldiers how to spot constellation patterns, her four hands tracing shapes in stars. By morning, the men spoke of them with reverence instead of terror.
The second day brought harder marching. Twenty-two miles through increasingly bitter wind. Frost crunched underfoot though autumn hadn't ended. Men muttered about unnatural weather until Jon reminded them this was still the North. Winter came when it pleased, not when calendars demanded.
The third evening, Greatjon Umber approached Jon directly. "The men wonder why you march with us at all. You could end this yourself, they say. Appear in the Sept of Baelor and turn their High Septon to ash."
"And then?" Jon accepted the ale horn Umber offered. "Another High Septon rises. Another crusade. Another war. They need to lose properly, sword to sword, man to man. They need to know the North defeated them, not just me."
"Aye, but will you fight?"
"If needed." Jon's eyes flared brighter. "But I'd rather not turn the Neck into glass."
Camp talk that night centered on the Neck itself. Veterans who'd traveled south shared tales. The causeway was narrow, barely wide enough for four men abreast. The swamps on either side swallowed armies whole. Quicksand, hidden pools, poisonous plants. The crannogmen knew every secret path, every safe spot, every killing ground.
"My grandfather fought there during the last Blackfyre rebellion," Lord Karstark said around the command fire. "Said hundred men could hold it against ten thousand if properly supplied."
"The Faith Militant aren't soldiers," Lady Mormont countered. "They're zealots. They'll throw themselves at the causeway until bodies pile high enough to walk across."
Jon said nothing, but Ranni's soft laugh chilled them all. "Such limited thinking. Why walk when you could simply freeze the swamp solid?"
The temperature dropped ten degrees. Ice formed on ale horns. Then Marika's warmth pushed back, and the cold retreated.
"A demonstration," Ranni said mildly. "Your enemies won't have such power, but never assume they'll fight as you expect."
On the fifth day, outriders brought word of refugees on the road. Northern families fleeing south, carrying tales of Faith Militant atrocities in the Riverlands. Septs burned with septons inside for refusing to preach the crusade. Women taken for "cleansing." Children branded with seven-pointed stars to mark them for conversion.
Robb's face went stone-hard hearing the reports. "Double the pace. Twenty-five miles minimum per day."
Some lords protested. The men needed rest. The supply train couldn't keep up. But when they saw Jon nod approval, arguments died.
The march became a grinding test of endurance. Up before dawn, marching until after dusk. Men ate cold rations on the move. Horses were rotated to prevent exhaustion. Jon moved through the column each day, sometimes walking alongside common soldiers, sometimes discussing tactics with lords. Where he passed, exhaustion seemed to lift. Men found strength for another mile, another hour.
Nights brought different lessons. Jon taught Robb the truth of command: how to read men's hearts, when to push and when to ease, the balance between fear and love that made soldiers follow orders that meant their death. Marika spoke of the burden of godhood, how power without purpose became tyranny. Ranni discussed the nature of fate, whether the future was written or merely probable.
"Your southern enemy believes destiny favors them," she told the gathered lords on the eighth night. "They think their god demands your destruction. This certainty makes them dangerous and foolish both."
On the tenth day, crannogmen emerged from seemingly empty fields. Small, dark-haired people dressed in greens and browns that made them nearly invisible until they chose to be seen. Their leader, Howland Reed, knelt before Robb but his eyes found Jon.
"Lord Stark. Lord Snow." His voice was soft as marsh wind. "The Neck is prepared. We've been killing southerners for two weeks now."
"How many?" Robb asked.
"Two hundred certain. A scouting party perhaps. Perhaps fifty more lost in the deep swamps. They tried pushing through three times. The causeway is too narrow for their numbers to matter, and when they tried circling through the wetlands..." Reed smiled thinly. "The swamp ate well."
"They've retreated?"
"Three miles south of the causeway's entrance. Eight thousand by our count, though more arrive daily. They're building siege equipment, though what they plan to siege is mystery. Moat Cailin is more ruin than fortress."
Jon spoke for the first time. "They plan to siege Northern resolve. Make us come to them. Fight on ground they choose."
Reed studied Jon carefully. "The old powers wake in you. The swamps sing of it. The children's blood knows its own."
That night, Jon stood apart from camp, looking south. Ranni materialized beside him, four hands weaving complex patterns that pulled heat from the air.
"You could end this without a single Northern death," she said.
"I could end many things. Should I end winter? Death? The need for men to choose between good and evil?" Jon's jaw tightened. "Power without restraint isn't strength. It's cowardice."
"Philosophy from a god-king. How amusing." But her tone held affection. "Very well. Let your mortals play their games. But if they threaten you truly..."
"Then I'll remind them why the Lands Between called me Lord."
The thirteenth day brought them within sight of the Neck. The land began to change, solid ground giving way to patches of marsh. The road narrowed. The air grew thick with moisture and the smell of rot. Birds they didn't recognize called from trees twisted into shapes that looked almost human in the dying light.
On the fourteenth night, scouts reported smoke columns to the south. The Faith Militant's camp. Eight thousand men, with more trickling in. They'd built wooden towers, though for what purpose remained unclear. The crusaders held prayer services that could be heard for miles, thousands of voices raised in hymns that spoke of purification through fire.
"Tomorrow we reach Moat Cailin," Robb announced to his lords. "Rest well. The day after, we remind the south why the North has never been conquered."
Jon found him after the others left. "You're learning."
"I'm terrified," Robb admitted. "Eight thousand fanatics thousand against our twenty-five. And thats just because the rest are still travelling. If we lose..."
"You won't lose. The Neck is worth a hundred thousand men by itself. And you have something they don't."
"You?"
"Besides me. You have home. They're invaders drunk on faith. You're defenders protecting everything you love. That matters when steel meets steel."
The final day's march was subdued. Men checked weapons obsessively. Prayers, mostly to the old gods, whispered through the ranks. The temperature continued dropping, breath misting in air that should have been autumn-warm.
Moat Cailin appeared at midday like broken teeth against grey sky. Three towers remained of what had once been twenty. The Gatehouse Tower leaned drunkenly but still stood. The Children's Tower was more intact, its upper levels providing clear views south. The Drunkard's Tower looked ready to collapse at a strong wind.
The causeway stretched beyond, a narrow ribbon of dry ground through endless swamp. Pools of black water reflected the grey sky. Strange plants grew in twisted profusion. The air itself felt hostile, thick with moisture and the promise of death.
"So this is where we stop them," Greatjon rumbled. "Doesn't look like much."
"It doesn't need to," Jon said. "The Neck has ended a dozen invasions. It'll end this one too."
Robb ordered camp made a half-mile from the fortress. Engineers would spend the night reinforcing what they could. Scouts would map every approach. Battle plans would be drawn and redrawn.
But first, Jon climbed to the top of the Children's Tower with his wives. From there, they could see smoke rising from the Faith Militant camp three miles south. Eight thousand zealots against twenty-five thousand Northmen, with the Neck itself as the deciding factor. Good odds to be sure.
"They'll come tomorrow," Marika said with certainty. "Their faith demands it. They've waited too long already."
"Let them come," Jon replied. His eyes blazed silver in the dying light. "The North remembers every invasion. Time to add another verse to that song."
Below, the Northern army settled in for what might be their last peaceful night. They cleaned weapons, wrote letters home, made peace with their gods. Tomorrow, the Neck would run red again.
The ancient fortress waited, patient as stone, ready to witness another chapter in its bloody history. The causeway stretched south like a throat waiting to swallow armies whole. And somewhere in the southern camp, thousands of faithful prepared to march into the maw of the North itself.
The transformation began at dawn.
Jon stood at the center of Moat Cailin's ruins, his eyes burning silver-bright as he raised both hands toward the broken stones. The air itself seemed to thicken, reality bending like heat shimmer over summer roads. Ancient masonry that had lain scattered for centuries began to tremble.
"Everyone back," Robb ordered, though his voice carried more awe than alarm. "Give him room."
The Northern lords retreated to safe distance, but none could look away. Jon's power manifested as visible threads of light, silver and gold intertwining as they reached for every fallen stone. The first block rose slowly, grinding against gravity's pull. Then another. Then dozens at once.
Stones flew through the air with impossible speed and force, fitting into gaps they'd fallen from three hundred years past. The Gatehouse Tower's eastern wall rebuilt itself in minutes, mortar appearing from nowhere to seal the joints. Cracks in the remaining structure healed like closing wounds.
"Old gods preserve us," Lord Glover whispered.
"The old gods have nothing to do with this," Lady Mormont replied, her voice steady despite the wonder in her eyes.
Ranni materialized beside Jon, her four hands weaving complex patterns that left trails of frost in the air. Where Jon rebuilt, she reinforced. Lunar magic seeped into the stones, creating a shimmer across their surface like oil on water. She touched the Gatehouse Tower's base, and the entire structure rang like a struck bell.
"Arrows will find no purchase here," she announced. "Steel will strike and be turned aside. The moon's blessing makes these walls mirrors to violence."
Marika approached from the north, golden radiance pouring from her skin. Where her bare feet touched earth, grass grew green despite the frost. She pressed both palms against the Children's Tower, and golden veins spread through the stonework like living things.
"Erdtree roots," she explained to Robb, who'd crept closer despite himself. "They'll grow through every foundation, binding stone to stone with strength beyond mortal engineering. This fortress will stand until the world itself ends."
The reconstruction accelerated. Jon's magic pulled stone from the swamp itself, blocks that had sunk centuries ago rising from black water. The Gatehouse Tower climbed to forty feet, its upper levels sprouting murder holes positioned to rain death on anyone crossing the causeway. Arrow slits appeared in perfect defensive positions. The gate itself, long rotted away, reformed from iron and ancient oak that should have been dust.
The Children's Tower underwent the most dramatic change. Ranni claimed it as her focus, adding crystalline spires that caught and refracted light into confusing patterns. Anyone looking directly at it would see three towers, or five, or none at all depending on the angle. The confusion would make targeting defenders nearly impossible.
"Illusion and misdirection," she told Greatjon Umber when he asked. "Your enemies will fire at phantoms while real archers strike from positions they cannot perceive."
The Drunkard's Tower, which had leaned precariously for generations, straightened as Jon reinforced its foundation with basalt drawn from deep beneath the swamp. The black stone absorbed light, making the tower appear as a void against the sky. Marika's golden roots wrapped around its base, anchoring it so firmly that not even dragonfire could topple it.
By midday, Northern soldiers gathered to watch in silent amazement. Some fell to their knees. Others made signs against evil. Most simply stared.
"Is this what you saw in the Lands Between?" Robb asked Jon during a brief rest.
"This is nothing." Jon wiped sweat from his brow, though his eyes still blazed with power. "I once watched Ranni pull a city from beneath the earth. Marika grew a tree that touched the stars. This?" He gestured at the rising fortress. "This is carpentry."
The causeway itself received special attention. Jon narrowed it further, using magic to sink portions into the swamp while raising others. The approach became a winding path barely wide enough for three men abreast. Any attacking force would be channeled into a perfect kill-zone between the three towers.
"They'll be slaughtered," Lord Karstark observed with grim satisfaction.
"That's the idea," Jon replied.
As the second day dawned, the fortress looked nothing like the ruin they'd found. Three proud towers dominated the landscape, connected by walkways that hadn't existed for centuries. The walls stood twenty feet thick at the base, tapering to ten at the top. Every stone hummed with barely contained power.
Northern archers arrived throughout the day. Five hundred of the best, hand-picked from every house. They took positions in the towers, marveling at the perfect sight lines, the ingenious murder holes, the way the enchanted walls seemed to guide their aim.
"I could put an arrow through a sparrow's eye from here," one Umber archer declared.
Ranni smiled, her blue face serene. "You'll do better than that. The tower knows its purpose. It will help your arrows find their marks."
That afternoon, the crannogmen emerged from the swamps like ghosts becoming flesh. Hundreds of them, more than anyone had seen gathered in living memory. They moved through the bog without disturbing the water's surface, appearing and disappearing at will.
Howland Reed himself materialized before Jon, going to one knee in the old fashion. "The Old Gods sing your name, Jon Snow. Or should I say, Jon Targaryen?"
"Just Jon." He helped the smaller man rise. "What do your people see to the south?"
"Eight thousand fools who think their faith will keep them from drowning. They've built rafts and bridges, thinking to cross the swamps. We've been letting them see us, drawing them into the deeper pools." Reed's smile was sharp as a blade. "Seven hundred won't march with them tomorrow. The bog has already begun its feast."
Jon nodded, then raised his voice so all could hear. "Lord Reed and his people know every path through these swamps. They are the Neck's true defenders. Treat them with the respect they deserve."
That evening, Jon began the final preparations. He walked the causeway's length, pressing his palm to the earth every few yards. Where he touched, runes appeared, glowing silver before sinking into the ground.
"Wards," he explained to Robb. "Anyone who crosses them with hostile intent will feel their strength sapped. Not enough to kill, but enough to make lifting a sword feel like lifting a mountain."
Marika added her own touches, growing thorned vines along the causeway's edges that would entangle anyone who tried to leave the path. The thorns wept a sap that burned like acid.
Ranni's contribution was fog. She showed the defenders how it would work, conjuring a mist so thick that men couldn't see their own hands. But from the towers, the view remained clear.
"The fog knows friend from foe," she assured them. "You'll see through it as if it weren't there."
As night fell on the second day, Jon performed one final act of magic. He cut his palm, letting silver blood drop onto the earth. Where it touched, shapes began to form. Wolves made of moonlight and shadow, dozens of them, their eyes burning with cold fire.
"Spectral guardians," he said. "They'll patrol at night, howling warning if enemies approach. They cannot kill, but their bite will freeze a man's soul enough to make him reconsider his faith."
The wolves dispersed into the darkness, their howls echoing across the swamp. Several Southern scouts who'd crept too close fled screaming back to their camp.
On the third morning, the transformation was complete. Moat Cailin stood restored beyond its ancient glory, a fusion of Northern engineering and otherworldly power. The very air around it tasted of magic, thick and electric like the moment before lightning strikes.
Robb stood atop the children's tower with Jon, looking south. "Will it be enough?"
"The fortress? Yes. But the true question is whether your men will hold when they see what's coming."
"What do you mean?"
Before Jon could answer, scouts arrived at full gallop, their horses lathered with sweat.
"My lords," the lead scout gasped. "The Faith Militant has broken camp. Eight thousand and a bit more, all told. They march in processional, singing war-hymns that echo across the land. Banners of the Seven-Pointed Star stretch for miles."
"How long?" Robb asked.
"Two days, my lord. Perhaps less if they force the pace."
Jon's eyes flared brighter. The spectral wolves howled in response, their voices carrying an edge of hunger.
"Let them come," he said softly. "The Neck has drunk the blood of invaders for eight thousand years. Time to remind the South why Winter always comes for those who march too far North."
The smell of magic hung heavy in the air, reality itself bent around the restored fortress like a cloak of power. In two days, that power would be tested against the faith of Eight thousand zealots.
The North was ready.
The Faith Militant appeared with the dawn, their column stretching across the southern horizon like a wound against the grey morning. Eight thousand zealots marched in perfect processional, their voices raised in hymns that carried across the wetlands. The seven-pointed star adorned every banner, every shield, every breastplate that caught the weak sunlight. They moved with the certainty of the righteous, boots striking the ground in unified rhythm that made the earth itself seem to tremble.
From atop the Gatehouse Tower, Robb watched them come. His hands gripped the restored stone so tightly his knuckles went white. "There's so many."
"Numbers mean nothing here," Lord Umber said, though his usual boisterous confidence sounded forced. "The causeway makes them come to us a handful at a time."
The Faith Militant reached the causeway's entrance by mid-morning. Their septon-commanders, distinguished by golden stars embroidered on white robes, rode back and forth shouting orders. The host arranged itself into ordered ranks, shields locked, spears bristling forward like a metal forest.
"First wave forming up," a Northern scout called. "Two thousand, looks like."
Jon stood motionless atop the Children's Tower, his silver eyes tracking every movement below. Ranni materialized beside him, her four hands weaving lazy patterns that left frost crystals hanging in the air.
"They genuinely believe their faith will protect them," she observed with detached curiosity. "How fascinating that humans can convince themselves of impossibilities."
"Faith has its own power," Jon replied. "Just not the kind that stops arrows."
The first wave advanced onto the causeway with shields raised, packed so tightly their shoulders touched. They sang as they marched, a battle hymn about cleansing flame and divine judgment. Two thousand men compressed into a column barely three men wide, those behind pushing those ahead forward with nowhere to go but straight into the restored fortress's kill zone.
"Nock," came the order from the towers.
Five hundred Northern bows bent in unison. The enchanted walls seemed to hum in anticipation.
"Draw."
The Faith Militant reached the first of Jon's ward-runes. Their singing faltered as invisible weight settled on their shoulders. Men stumbled, suddenly struggling to lift feet that felt cast in lead. The press behind gave them no choice but to continue forward.
"Loose."
The sky darkened with arrows. Five hundred shafts arced through the air, their paths guided by Ranni's lunar magic and the towers' ancient purpose. They fell like black rain onto the packed column below.
The singing turned to screaming.
Men toppled with arrows sprouting from necks, eyes, the gaps in their armor that they hadn't known existed. Bodies fell onto the narrow causeway, tripping those behind. Some tumbled off the edges into the black water where Marika's thorned vines caught them, holding them half-submerged while the acidic sap ate through armor and flesh alike.
"Nock. Draw. Loose."
The second volley arrived before the first wave could process what was happening. More bodies fell. The front ranks tried to raise shields higher, but the press of men behind made maneuvering impossible. They could only march forward into death or be trampled by their own forces.
From the swamps on both flanks came a different horror. Crannogmen, invisible until the moment they struck, sent poison darts through the air with deadly accuracy. The toxin worked fast; men clutched their throats, foam bubbling from their mouths as they collapsed. Those who tried to help them stepped off the causeway's edge and found themselves sinking into quicksand that had looked like solid ground.
"Lizard-lions in the eastern pools," Howland Reed reported calmly from his position. "They're feeding well today."
The screams of men being dragged under by massive jaws added to the chaos. The first wave's rear ranks tried to retreat, but the second wave was already advancing, ordered forward by septon-commanders who couldn't see the slaughter ahead.
"They're crushing their own men," Robb said, horror creeping into his voice.
"That's siege warfare," Jon replied from his tower, his voice carrying impossibly across the distance. "Numbers become a curse when there's nowhere to go."
The causeway became a meat grinder. Bodies piled three deep in some places. Men slipped on blood-slick stones, fell, and were trampled by their brothers trying to retreat. Arrows continued to fall in disciplined volleys, each one finding its mark with supernatural accuracy.
After losing two hundred men in less than ten minutes, the first wave finally broke. They turned and ran, climbing over their own dead, pushing through the second wave in desperate flight. Some jumped into the swamps rather than face the arrows, only to discover drowning in quicksand was worse than a clean death by arrow.
"Reform the line," the septon-commanders screamed. "Cowards and apostates, reform the line."
But panic had taken hold. It took an hour to restore order, to drag bodies off the causeway, to convince men that the next assault would be different.
The second wave came at midday with a new strategy. They advanced with shields locked overhead, creating a roof against the arrows. They moved slower, more carefully, stepping over their dead brothers with grim determination.
"Fire arrows," Robb commanded.
Pitch-soaked shafts ignited along the walls. Five hundred flames rose into the grey sky.
"Loose."
The fire arrows struck the shield roof and stuck, burning. At first the Faith Militant held, but pitch dripped through gaps, setting hair and cloth alight. When the first man broke formation to beat at flames consuming his cloak, the shield wall collapsed. Regular arrows found the gaps immediately. Men burned and bled, some throwing themselves into the swamp to extinguish flames only to find Marika's thorns waiting.
The second wave retreated with over three hundred casualties, leaving more bodies to obstacles on the narrow causeway.
"They're learning nothing," Lord Karstark observed. "Just throwing lives away."
"Faith blinds them," Jon said. "They believe their god demands this sacrifice."
The third assault came at dusk, desperation evident in its planning. They carried siege ladders, thinking to scale the towers directly. But the restored fortifications were too tall, the ground too muddy for proper placement. Ladders sank into the bog or toppled when men tried to climb. Those few who reached the walls found Ranni's lunar magic turned the stone surface into something like ice; fingers could find no purchase, and men fell screaming onto their brothers below.
Northern soldiers poured boiling oil from the murder holes, adding to the horror. The screams echoed across the swamp as darkness fell, mixing with the hymns still being sung in the Faith Militant camp.
By full dark, the Faith had lost five hundred men. The causeway was carpeted with corpses. The swamp had swallowed dozens more.
"Five hundred of theirs for none of ours," Greatjon Umber laughed, but the sound was hollow. Even he was disturbed by the scale of slaughter.
The Faith Militant retreated a mile from the causeway and made camp. Their hymns continued through the night, but now they had an edge of desperation. Funeral pyres burned for their dead, the smoke carrying the sick-sweet smell of burning flesh across the wetlands.
Jon remained atop the Children's Tower throughout the night, never moving, never blinking. His silver eyes glowed like stars in the darkness. Northern soldiers on watch whispered among themselves.
"He hasn't moved in six hours."
"Is he even breathing?"
"My cousin swears he saw him float. Just lifted off the stone for a moment."
"That's not our Jon anymore. That's something else wearing his face."
Robb climbed the tower near midnight, finding Jon exactly as the guards described. Utterly still, eyes fixed on the southern camp.
"You should rest," Robb said.
"I don't need rest anymore." Jon's voice was distant, hollow. "I haven't truly slept since I ate my first dragon heart. My body maintains itself through will alone now."
"That's... that's not human, Jon."
"No. It's not." Finally Jon turned, and Robb stepped back involuntarily. His brother's eyes weren't just silver anymore; they were voids filled with starlight, infinite and cold. "Does that frighten you?"
"Yes," Robb admitted.
"Good. It should. Power without fear becomes tyranny." Jon's expression softened slightly, becoming almost human again. "But I'm still your brother. That hasn't changed."
"Hasn't it?"
Jon didn't answer.
The second day brought sporadic attacks. Small probing assaults, testing for weakness. The Faith Militant tried attacking at dawn, hoping to blind defenders with the rising sun. Arrows found them anyway. They tried a night assault, creeping along the causeway in darkness. Jon's spectral wolves howled warning, and Northern arrows fell guided by moonlight.
Each attack was repulsed with heavy losses. Another three hundred Faith Militant died for no gain. Some drowned in the swamps trying to flank. Others fell to poison darts or arrows or the simple crush of bodies on the too-narrow causeway.
The crannogmen reported strange movements in the zealot camp. Floggings for those who suggested retreat. Executions for "cowardice" when men refused to join assault waves. The septon-commanders preached that death in service to the Seven guaranteed paradise, that fear was apostasy.
On the third day, more probing attacks. The Faith Militant tried using mantlets, rolling shields, even a hastily constructed battering ram. Nothing worked. The causeway was too narrow, the approach too perfectly designed for slaughter. Another two hundred dead joined the corpse piles that now had to be burned to prevent disease.
Eight hundred Faith Militant dead in three days. Maybe twenty Northern casualties, most from exhaustion or accidents rather than enemy action.
"They can't sustain this," Lord Manderly observed over the evening war council. "Eight hundred from eight thousand. One in ten already gone."
"Zealots don't count casualties," Jon replied. "They count martyrs."
That night, Northern scouts reported heated arguments in the Faith Militant camp. Some septon-commanders advocated retreat, others demanded increased aggression. The debate raged until dawn, when a consensus emerged from desperation and faith-drunk madness.
As the sun rose on the fourth day, drums began in the southern camp. Not the steady beat of march, but something faster, more primal. The entire Faith Militant host formed up, all seven thousand two hundred who remained. They arranged themselves in one massive column, fifty ranks deep.
"Seven save us," someone whispered from the walls. "They're all coming at once."
The septon-commanders rode along the ranks, blessing weapons, offering final prayers. Men knelt to receive sacraments. Seven thousand voices rose in a hymn that shook the air itself.
"They mean to drown us in bodies," Robb realized. "Accept any casualties to overwhelm us through pure numbers."
Jon descended from his tower for the first time in three days. He walked to the causeway's entrance, just behind the gates. His goddess-wives flanked him.
"The fools," Ranni said with something almost like pity. "They think faith alone can overcome reality."
"Let them come," Marika added, golden light pulsing from her skin. "Let them learn what it means to assault divinity itself."
Dawn broke cold and clear over the Neck, frost glittering on marsh grass like scattered diamonds. The air itself seemed to hold its breath, waiting for the violence about to unfold. In the southern camp, eight thousand Faith Militant formed ranks with the discipline of men who knew this day would determine their salvation or damnation.
Septon-commanders moved through the lines, their white robes pristine despite three days of slaughter. They carried golden censers that leaked sweet smoke, blessing weapons with holy oils, pressing seven-pointed stars to foreheads, whispering prayers that promised paradise for those who fell in righteous battle. Knights in the vanguard sat tall on destriers, lances decorated with ribbons bearing verses from the Seven-Pointed Star. Their armor had been polished to mirror brightness, as if purity of appearance could grant protection where faith alone had failed.
The drums started first. Not the measured beat of military advance but something primal, desperate. Then the horns joined, a discordant symphony that echoed across the wetlands. Eight thousand voices rose as one, the Warrior's Hymn rolling across the bog like thunder:
"Warrior, lend your strength to me,
In battle's hour, I call to thee.
My sword is yours, my shield, my life,
Guide me through this holy strife."
The Northern defenders tensed at their positions. Archers checked their strings for the hundredth time. Men-at-arms gripped weapons tighter. Even the crannogmen, usually invisible in their swamp positions, emerged partially from cover to witness what was coming.
Then Jon stepped off the Children's Tower into empty air.
He didn't fall.
Silver light exploded from his back, forming wings that stretched thirty feet across. They weren't feathered like a bird's or membranous like a bat's. They were composed of pure starlight, thousands of tiny points of brilliance that moved and shifted like living constellations. Ranni's blue lunar magic swirled through the right wing while Marika's golden radiance infused the left, the two powers combining into something that hurt to look at directly.
Jon rose smoothly, deliberately, ascending until he hovered fifty feet above the causeway. The morning sun caught his form, casting strange shadows that didn't match any natural light. His black cloak billowed despite the still air. His eyes blazed silver-white, visible even from the Faith Militant's ranks a mile away.
The Northern army erupted. Men who'd fought beside Ned Stark, who'd seen a dozen battles, fell to their knees. Some wept. Others cheered until their throats went raw. "The Young Wolf flies," someone shouted, and the cry spread through the ranks. "JON! JON! JON!"
The Faith Militant's hymn died mid-verse. Eight thousand men stood frozen, staring at the impossible figure floating above them. Horses whinnied and shied. Several knights dropped their lances. In the center of their formation, a young soldier's bladder released, the smell of piss sharp in the cold air.
Jon's voice, when it came, needed no shouting. Magic carried it to every ear on the battlefield, clear as if he stood beside each man personally. The words arrived in the listener's native tongue, whether Common, Old Tongue, or the bastard dialects of Flea Bottom.
"I offer mercy one time."
The wings pulsed, sending ripples of light across the morning sky.
"Leave this place. Return to your homes. Tell your families you chose life over meaningless death. No harm will come to those who turn back now."
The silence stretched like a held breath. Somewhere in the swamp, a bird called, its cry sharp and mocking. Water lapped against the causeway's edges. In the Faith Militant's ranks, men looked at each other, seeing their own terror reflected in their brothers' eyes. Several in the rear ranks took half-steps backward.
Then laughter cracked across the morning like a whip.
Septon-Commander Raynard pushed through the ranks on his white destrier, his golden star catching sunlight. His face was gaunt from fasting, eyes bright with fanatic fervor. When he laughed again, it had the edge of madness.
"The demon offers false mercy," he shouted, voice carrying without magic, powered by pure zealous conviction. "See how it flies on unholy wings, corrupted by dark powers. The Seven grant us true salvation through holy war. Paradise awaits those who die destroying this abomination."
He raised his mace, golden star atop it gleaming. "Who among you would trade eternal glory for a coward's peace? Who would face the Father's judgment having fled from evil?"
The spell of fear broke. Shame replaced terror in eight thousand hearts. Men who'd considered fleeing now gripped weapons tighter, afraid of being thought cowards more than they feared death.
"FOR THE SEVEN," Raynard screamed.
"FOR THE SEVEN," eight thousand voices roared back.
The charge began like an avalanche, slow at first, then building to unstoppable momentum. Knights lowered lances and spurred horses forward. Infantry raised spears and swords and axes, racing up the causeway toward Moat Cailin. Toward Jon hovering above them like judgment itself.
They ran over their own dead from previous assaults, boots slipping on dried blood, stumbling over corpses not yet cleared. But they kept coming, a wave of steel and faith and desperate courage. The causeway filled edge to edge with bodies pressing forward. Those on the edges were pushed into the swamp, where thorns and quicksand and lizard-lions waited. They screamed but their brothers didn't slow, couldn't slow with the press behind them.
Arrows began falling from Moat Cailin's towers. Men died by dozens, by scores. Bodies piled up, creating obstacles that tripped those behind. The charge became a crawl over corpses, men climbing over their dead brothers to continue forward. Still they came.
Jon watched from above, and for a moment, those below could see something almost human in his expression. Sadness. Genuine sorrow for what was about to happen.
He gave them ten seconds. Ten heartbeats to reconsider, to see the bodies beneath their feet and understand the futility. To choose life.
They didn't.
A knight's lance passed through the space where Jon hovered, the man having hurled it in desperate faith. It passed through his wing harmlessly, the starlight reforming instantly. More projectiles followed. Arrows, spears, even rocks thrown by men who had nothing else. They all passed through him like he was made of moonlight.
Eight thousand men screaming for his death. Eight thousand souls choosing destruction over mercy.
Jon's expression hardened like winter ice. The sadness vanished, replaced by something older, colder, infinitely more terrible. His wings spread to their full span, nearly sixty feet across now, blotting out the morning sun. The air began to vibrate, a low thrumming that made teeth ache and bones shiver.
Power gathered around him in visible waves. The temperature plummeted twenty degrees in seconds. Frost spread across the causeway despite the men's body heat. The very air began to scream, reality protesting as Jon pulled more and more energy into himself.
Ranni's lunar magic swirled up from below, blue-white and terrible. Marika's golden radiance descended from above, warm as summer and cold as divine judgment. The two powers met in Jon, and where they touched, space itself cracked like broken glass.
The words that came from Jon's mouth belonged to no tongue spoken by living men. They predated the First Men, predated the Children of the Forest, predated even the songs the earth sang to itself in the time before time. Each syllable carved itself into reality, leaving scars in the air that bled light.
"Azyr veth korvandros. Stellarium mortis descendat."
His right hand rose, fingers splayed toward the charging mass of humanity below. For a heartbeat, nothing. Then the world screamed.
A beam of pure cosmic destruction erupted from his palm, wider than a man was tall, composed of every color that existed and several that didn't. Comet Azur, the spell that had killed demigods in the Lands Between, now unleashed upon mortal men who thought faith could protect them from the fundamental forces of creation.
The beam carved through the charging army like a scythe through wheat. But these men didn't simply die. They ceased. Where the azure light touched, matter unmade itself. Bodies became outline, then shadow, then nothing. Not even ash remained. The beam swept left, erasing two hundred men mid-scream. Right, another hundred and fifty vanished between heartbeats. The causeway itself groaned and cracked where the spell touched stone, reality struggling to maintain cohesion.
Those just outside the beam's path weren't spared. The heat, if it could be called that, stripped flesh from bone at ten feet. The light burned out eyes at twenty. Men threw themselves into the swamp to escape, preferring drowning to dissolution.
Jon's left hand rose, and the air filled with scarlet spores.
"No," Ranni said softly from her tower, recognizing what was coming. "He learned that from her. From Malenia."
The Scarlet Aeonia bloomed beneath Jon like a flower of apocalypse. Petals of pure rot unfurled across the causeway, each one fifty feet long, beautiful and terrible in their diseased perfection. Where the scarlet touched, time accelerated cruelly. Young knights aged to ancient corpses in seconds, skin wrinkling, hair whitening, bones brittling, bodies collapsing into dust. Armor rusted and crumbled. Swords became red powder. Even the stones aged, cracking and weathering as if centuries passed in moments.
A septon-commander, his faith absolute even now, charged through the rot-flower's edge. His left arm aged to nothing, flesh sloughing off in sheets. He kept running on legs that were crumbling, reaching toward Jon with his remaining hand, prayers spilling from lips that were already turning to leather. He made it three more steps before his spine gave way, aged beyond structure's ability to support. He collapsed into himself, becoming a pile of ancient bones and rusted armor.
Behind Jon, the sky darkened unnaturally. Stars became visible at midday, and among them, something else. Ranni's Dark Moon rose like a second sun made of winter itself. The temperature dropped so fast that moisture in the air became ice crystals that hung glittering and still.
The moon pulsed once.
A wave of absolute cold washed across the battlefield. Men froze mid-scream, their last breaths becoming ice in their throats. They became sculptures of their final moments, terror and faith preserved in crystal clarity. A knight frozen with sword raised high. A soldier captured mid-stumble over a corpse. A septon with arms spread wide, still preaching even as ice replaced blood.
Then the moon pulsed again, and the sculptures shattered.
Eight hundred ice statues exploded simultaneously. The sound was like every window in the world breaking at once. Frozen fragments of what had been men scattered across the causeway, tinkling as they fell like deadly snow. Some pieces were recognizable. A hand here, still gripping a sword. A face there, expression of faith frozen forever.
Above, the sky cracked like an egg. Golden light poured through the fissures as Marika's power manifested. Elden Stars began to fall, each one a miniature sun trailing golden fire. They descended slowly at first, almost gently, beautiful enough that some men stopped fleeing to stare.
The first star struck the causeway's center. The explosion vaporized everything within twenty feet, leaving a perfectly circular crater filled with golden glass. The second and third struck simultaneously, overlapping blasts that turned a hundred men into component atoms. More stars fell, dozens, then scores. Each impact was thunder and light and divine judgment made manifest.
Men tried to run, but where could they go? The causeway was narrow, packed with bodies living and dead. The swamps on either side offered only different deaths. They could only press forward or back, trampling their brothers, climbing over corpses, screaming prayers that went unanswered.
Jon raised both hands to the sky, and every Northern defender gasped. They knew this gesture. They'd seen it in shared dreams.
"Get down," Robb shouted to his men. "Everyone down, NOW."
The sky turned red. Not the red of sunset or blood, but the deep crimson of stellar death. The air itself groaned, then split with a sound like the world's spine breaking. Through the tear in reality came stones that had traveled between stars, pieces of Astel's corpse still carrying the void's cold.
The first meteorite struck the Faith Militant's center mass. The impact liquified everything within fifty feet, turning men into red mist that painted the swamp crimson. The shockwave knocked down everyone within two hundred feet, rupturing organs, shattering bones. The second meteorite hit the rear ranks trying to flee. The third struck the causeway itself, opening a gap thirty feet wide that immediately filled with swamp water and blood.
Dozens of meteorites fell in sequence, each one guided by Jon's will to maximum devastation. The causeway ceased to exist as a continuous structure, becoming a series of blood-slick islands separated by craters. Men fell into the gaps, drowning in water that had turned black with ash and gore.
Jon descended through the hellscape he'd created, walking on air as if stairs existed where none could see them. His wings cast shadows that moved wrong, sometimes falling up, sometimes sideways, always cold. Where his feet would have touched, reality rippled like water.
A group of knights, the last organized unit, tried to form a shield wall. Jon raised his hand, and death itself took shape. Ancient Death Rancor, a spell that should not exist in this world. Spirits erupted from the corpses around them, not ghosts but death itself given form. Skeletal hands burst from dead flesh, grabbing the living, pulling them down into the pile of corpses. The knights screamed as invisible fingers reached into their chests, squeezing hearts until they burst.
The Ruins Greatsword manifested in Jon's grip, though it was too large for any mortal to wield. The blade was gravity itself, bending light around its edge. He swung it in a horizontal arc, and the gravitational wave pulled a thousand fleeing men together like iron filings to a lodestone. They compressed, screaming as bones broke and organs ruptured, crushed together into a ball of flesh that kept shrinking until physics itself intervened and the mass exploded outward.
Septon-Commander Raynard still lived, somehow. He stood atop a mound of corpses, his white robes red with blood, still preaching. Still demanding his men fight. Still believing faith would triumph.
Jon's greatsword became something worse. The Black Blade, wrapped in Destined Death itself. The blade that had killed Maliketh. The edge that could cut the connection between soul and flesh permanently.
Raynard raised his mace in final defiance. "The Seven protect..."
The Black Blade passed through him like shadow through light. For a moment, nothing. Then Raynard's soul became visible, a golden outline trying to separate from his flesh. The Destined Death caught it, held it, then shredded it into nothing. Not death. Cessation. No afterlife, no paradise, no judgment. Simply an end.
Raynard's body collapsed, and with it, the last organized resistance.
But Jon wasn't finished. He rose higher, and his throat began to glow with inner fire. When he opened his mouth, it wasn't his voice but the roar of Agheel, the dragon whose heart he'd consumed. Dragonfire erupted in a continuous stream, sweeping across the scattered survivors. Men who'd thought themselves beyond fear found new depths of terror as ancient dragonflame turned their brothers into walking torches.
The flames were selective, guided by will. They avoided the Northmen entirely, passing through the towers harmlessly. But any man bearing the seven-pointed star burned. Armor melted onto flesh. Weapons became molten metal that ate through hands. The very air ignited, creating firestorms that sucked oxygen from lungs.
Eight minutes.
That's how long the slaughter lasted. Eight minutes to reduce eight thousand men to fewer than a thousand. The causeway was gone, replaced by a hellscape of craters, corpses, and carnage. Body parts floated in water turned red. The smell of rot, burning flesh, and voided bowels mixed with ozone from the cosmic magics unleashed.
The survivors huddled in scattered groups, many of them insane from what they'd witnessed. Some clawed at their own eyes, trying to unsee. Others knelt in pools of blood, praying to gods who'd abandoned them. A few simply sat and wept, minds broken beyond repair.
Jon descended to hover just above them, his wings finally dimming. The cosmic horror retreated, leaving something almost human. Almost.
His voice, when it came, sounded tired. Not physically tired, but soul-weary, as if the weight of what he'd done pressed on him despite its necessity.
"Go."
That single word made grown men sob with relief.
"Tell your High Septon what happens to those who march on the North with swords and prayers. Tell him thatHouse Stark and Jon Snow, Starborn, Godslayer, Dragonheart, Lord of the Lands Between, Elden Lord, holds this land."
He paused, letting them see his eyes. Still silver, still inhuman, still containing depths of power they couldn't comprehend.
"Tell him I showed mercy once. I will not show it again."
The survivors needed no further encouragement. They ran. Weapons abandoned, faith abandoned, many of them literally throwing off armor to run faster. They splashed through blood, climbed over corpses, shoved aside brothers too wounded to flee. Some jumped into the swamps rather than pass near Jon, preferring drowning to proximity with death incarnate.
Within minutes, the causeway emptied except for the dead and dying. Thousands of corpses in various states of destruction. The moaning of the wounded mixed with the lap of water against broken stone. Carrion birds, drawn by the feast, circled but didn't land. Even they feared to approach.
Jon descended slowly, his wings fading to wisps of light, then nothing. His feet touched the blood-soaked ground before Moat Cailin's gates. He walked forward with measured steps, each one leaving frost despite the blood's warmth. He stopped beside Robb, in a show of solidarity, who stood frozen at the gate, face pale with shock.
For a moment, silence. The entire Northern army, twenty-five thousand men who'd come ready for war, stood motionless. They'd watched divinity manifest. They'd seen Jon, the boy who'd played in Winterfell's yard, become something beyond mortal comprehension.
Then Greatjon Umber fell to one knee. The massive lord, who'd never knelt to anyone but his liege, dropped like his strings were cut.
Lord Karstark followed. Then Lord Glover. Lady Mormont. Lord Manderly's bulk lowered carefully but inevitably.
Like a wave, twenty-five thousand Northmen knelt. Not the knee of fealty to a lord, but something deeper. The knee of awe. Of recognition that they stood before something that transcended normal authority.
They knelt to House Stark, yes. Robb stood as their lord, Ice across his back, young face aged by what he'd witnessed. But they also knelt to Jon. To the terrible divinity he'd become. To the protector who'd shown them that the North had a guardian again.
Jon looked across the sea of kneeling men, and for just a moment, his expression cracked. A flash of the boy he'd been, horrified by what he'd become. Then it was gone, replaced by the mask of godhood.
"Rise," he said simply. "The North kneels to no one."
As they stood, shaking, many openly weeping, one thought echoed through twenty-five thousand minds:
The North remembers. And now, the North has teeth that even gods would fear.
Comments
Gr1ffin
Sorry, forgot to mention that the Moat Cailin also had more than 3 towers. At it's Prime, they had something like 20. The last 3 remain because of the dragons who knocked them down during the Dance of the Dragons... or something. If Jon and his wives brought Moat Cailin back to it's Prime, then there should be more towers.
Gr1ffin
I'm confused on the numbers. Origibally you had 8000 heading north with more joining up as the went. They arrived with 8000. Lost 700 in swamps until they reached the Moat. Lost 500 on first day. Then 700. Then more. Then they somehow had 8000 again at the end there to fight Jon. I think you need to clarify the numbers. Also, the fact that 500 Archers only killed 300 in the first wave after 10 minutes is weird. Unless all these people are fully kit out in full armor and everything, they would especially be open to arrows.
DeAngelo Ellis
Okay Tywin think for a minute...8k men went North and only a handful came back covered in gore. They had knights among them so it wasn't a common rabble fighting. Tywin you should give up and leave well enough alone lol.
travis btmb
Tftc i hope jon remembers to undo all the damage he did to the terrain with his attacks since the causeway is a rather important route.
