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Trap Online Chapter 11: Making a Better Home

🕑 Added 2020-06-18 17:00:43 +0000 UTC

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Madjic

Thanks I changed it slightly by adding Idea Thanks for pointing it out. :D

AchlysApep

So only obvious thing I noticed was the third paragraph after talking about massages I believe you said that sounds like a brilliant. If it is like that you may want to add idea or just get rid of “like a”. Loved it and can’t wait for more


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