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Trap Online Chapter 43: Goblin Chieftain

🕑 Added 2020-09-22 21:14:04 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

No problem.... I was thinking being as he just hit level 10 he could have a system upgrade happen that adds any features you want and not effect the past story sections...

Grangel

Understood... no problem... I guess I am hoping (no confirmation or denial needed) him and Victoria (Viccy) get it on in both worlds because they seem to like each other and have some fetishes... I think Vic is the one who made elves Futanari (becasue she wanted to be one, also would explain her understanding of him figuring out his fetish) not one of her developers.... just my opinion 😉😁

Madjic

I do not spoil especially in the open where it would show everyone the spoiler.

Madjic

Thanks for your suggestion I will make note of that I appreciate it! :D

Grangel

Curiosity question.... Is all the sex going to be virtual or will there be something IRL?

Grangel

I have some suggestions with regards to the system... you can take them or leave them... add them in where they are missing or leave them out... It's just I love system stories and I have been playing D&D since the mid 70's (yeah I'm old 😂) and am an avid player of many role-playing style video games ... 1. Now that he has excepted the video game and is starting to have fun and want to develop in the game he should check his status more often (I know this can possible be a pain for you but as a gamer I would start checking all the benefits I get especially since he can get it from sex as well as combat) 2. When you pull up the Status screen they are no skills, inventory or spells listed there which I would expect there should be or at least a {tab} for these so he can look at them (just a suggestion, maybe you don't want to show his current spells, current inventory [which at this point he has a lot of ingredients] or any skills he has or can pick up) 3. In a lot of cases you keep saying he receives a notification via your writing and not show what the notification is or at times when I expect a notification there isn't one (example when he used the Incubus Crystal, no system notification of it happening, what happened [effects] or success or failure of what he did)... please remember these are just suggestions from a D&D/Role-Playing gamer...

Grangel

I love this story, the characters and the way things are going.!!


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