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Trap Online Chapter 51: The Druid

🕑 Added 2020-10-19 09:07:13 +0000 UTC

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Madjic

This is one of the characters I will be working hard to develop properly. I think she will be fun, though.

Grangel

She is very straight forward and dominant but she is not very playful or teasing in her ways...

Seems to be too much on the dom side ?

Madjic

I am on the fence with this chapter. I like it but also don't. Tell me what you guys think about it. I sat rereading it for three hours trying to find what I disliked about it while liking it. I need some feedback. I am entirely open to redoing this chapter, to be honest. The character of the Druid is coming out right but I still don't like it, and I am going crazy over it with my tired mind. I will stop ranting now. Please enjoy and tell me what you think.


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