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Trap Online Chapter 53: Confessions

🕑 Added 2020-10-29 13:36:21 +0000 UTC

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Madjic

Thanks for pointing those out. Thanks for the feedback as well.

Damn I want the next chapter now ! You're killing me man ! :D

Grangel

Great chapter!! I really love this story so far!!

Grangel

" I want to calm this down a bit before we go too far like condoms." this sentence needs a comma after far and then the last part needs to be something similar to ', like using condoms'.

Grangel

This sentence doesn't make sense..."I took Victoria aside into my room not long later."

Grangel

Should be 'resumes' here "When it was done, I told them that I had gotten the resues from Chris and so it should only be a couple more days before we had a cook with us."


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