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Trap Online Chapter 63: Quest

🕑 Added 2020-11-29 11:57:21 +0000 UTC

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Madjic

Thanks Like I said in my comment I reread it and it felt like an incomplete thought to me.

Grangel

Some interesting interconnections here...good chapter... I like the rewrite better...

Grangel

"She then left letting leaving the room in silence." should remove the 'letting'

Madjic

Hey Guys, Like I said in my comment before I have extended the chapter after rereading it many times. I think the interaction is more filled out and better for the story. Sorry about the 'Early' Release and I have notified you of the changes. Thanks, and please enjoy!

Madjic

Hey guys. I am about to go to bed but I reread like 5 more times and have come to the conclusion I will be extending it. It feels like an unfinished thought to me. Sorry for this and I will get back to it tomorrow and I will notify everyone of the changes

Grangel

"We looked at the menus, ordered food to fill our food bars, and relaxed for a second while the serer set out some basics." 5th word from the end 'server'


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