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Trap Online Chapter 66: We're all Humans

🕑 Added 2020-12-14 07:23:34 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

I like this conversation. You will have to deal with how she finally decides to deal with all the Government stuff at some point... sad I can see them crashing their place or capturing them in the world and using methods on her that she was worried about to get what they want so there is a lot of story elements to be explored or that she needs to think about in advance to block out so our couple is safe and sane and under their own control not somebody else...

Grangel

"I leaned back after finishing landing on the other side of the couch." sentence needs to be fixed...

Madjic

So... I actually wasn't planning on doing this chapter tonight. It flowed out, and I liked it. I had a hard time with Rick's side getting my point across, and I think I might have fucked up a little on it. I am hoping I got my point across though. Please tell me if I have or if I haven't. If I haven't, I will go back and edit. It's my own thoughts, though, so I can interpret my own rant easier. Thanks, and Enjoy!


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