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Trap Online Chapter 67: Bad Roleplay

🕑 Added 2020-12-19 11:27:14 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

Good chapter!!! I think it is a good connecting chapter!! Now the story can continue on the next chapter. When does the cook move in?? The game is public at this point, are they going to meet any other players in the game? Doesn't mean they need to meet them IRL, just game interactions I am questioning. What about meeting his daughter in game....we haven't heard from her in a while...

Grangel

"He let go of my head, and I stopped choking on her cock." 'He' should be 'She'

Madjic

Short Chapter, but I had fun with something that I was struggling with. I liked it, though, and I will not lie; this was something of a filler that could be "left out" of the story, but I like this scene. If anything, I think I might come back and extend it, but I wanted it to feel authentic. Let me know what you think. Thanks!


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