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Chapter 122 - The Bone Choir

🕑 Added 2025-08-07 19:48:36 +0000 UTC

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Zachary Scott

Yeah, I can understand where you're coming from for sure. I just think the solution to having to refer to them as slaves in narration would be Brynn knowing all their names. But the group is so large that would be really clunky to introduce. And then I've worried if he just says man/woman it will make someone wonder if it was an aspirant or slave. On the one hand, I think referring to someone as a slave in this circumstance if they are a slave doesn't imply he condones it or sees them as less human. It's the same way you see someone in a police officer uniform and call them an officer until you learn their name. Labeling them based on the uniform doesn't really come with moral judgments in my opinion. The thing I definitely agree being an issue though is just saying "slave girl" and "slave boy." I'll make sure to get rid of those and avoid them in the future. I think those phrases have some uniquely negative context that didn't jump out to me until you mentioned it. Pretty soon though I imagine Brynn will have learned their names and the slave designation should be largely left behind.

Scott Walker

Love the story and the chapter. I hope when you edit it that you reduce the "slave" designation by like 90%. It's really jarring to have our heroes who believe slavery is wrong to such a degree that they'd risk their life to also just casually refer to people as slaves. Man, woman, person will do most of the time. Enslaved People. Like hell if I was dying and someone referred to me as "slave girl" or "slave boy" like damn that's dehumanizing as hell.

Ben Bass

TYFTC! Yay pebble, with a glimpse of dark pebble too! Considering what the Bone Choir just did, unless they are really wobbly I don't think they will coordinate with the Mongrel army. Unless they are impressed that Brynn sussed out the best way to get them from the field.


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