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Memoirs 203 - The citadel's heart

🕑 Added 2023-10-27 20:26:47 +0000 UTC

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Tin

Similar to the intense but balanced dialogue btw Malachi and Scarlett, I look forward to the same smart writing in the next chapter. I don’t think I can predict but some considerations: Scarlett is intelligent enough to right after the coming explanation share that Fynn then Abraham and knights are coming and ask Malachi to let her handle the explanation. There is no way Malachi did not notice fondness/friendship btw Rosa and Scarlett or the anger towards Anguish. Flameruner will be avoiding bad trope timing and keeping to the characters’s intelligence ie Abraham will cautiously approach. Fynn will run ahead of Abraham as he understands Scarlett’s want for discretion and arrive quickly and without fear due to his superior senses and immediately guard her rear. Scarlett will drop Ittar’s Genesis into her pocket dimension as soon as she feels her mana is in the safe zone, Fynn tells her they are coming (assuming he arrives early) and she hears the knights in heavy armour. The first thing Scarlett will explain to Abraham is that they are looking to destroy the Vile… even if Abraham does not think highly of Malachi, he’d want to protect the continent first over his own bias. Scarlett also ensured they all safely arrived after all and given the carnage she left behind, they’d all know she could have taken the out earlier. Abraham has also shown he is very open minded and even sympathetic to his enemies. Rosa thanks to her trust in Scarlett is going to have renewed strength to hold down Anguish. Scarlett is going to really stick it to Anguish - and it will be very satisfying :).

Tin

What great tension! I literally held my breath reading through. And as I had hoped, no stupid trope of inexplicable out of character mixup where Malachi and Scarlett got into an all out fight. Malachi using the demons attack to test the situation made total sense. Mistress’s hate of Viles would lay a trap to ensure the new Vile - if the caster absorbs the power - to literally burn out and ensure there is not real Vile replacement. Brilliant!

Colin Love

Seems like Scarlett is finally making progress. Though the clock is ticking in more ways than one. The knights and priest Abraham finished in the hall and are likely coming if not rushing toward the them as we speak. How Abraham reacts if he see’s things as they are is anyone’s guess. He likes Rosa and is a maverick so I don’t doubt he would be opposed to saving her. The knights may follow his lead but It’s gonna be one helluva bad look if and let’s be honest more than likely when they show up … it’s anyone’s guess how he reacts especially considering Malachi’s history. Seeing her with a ritual circle while Rosa sits in the dark throne is going to require some awkward explanations .. that is if he doesn’t sense Ittars Genesis that I can only assume would cause all hell to break lose. 😏

Alex Doan

very satisfying everytime Scarlett uses her unexplainable knowledge to command control of the situation, no matter how bizarre it may be

Gwalmeich

I loved the chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!


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