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Memoirs 204 - Heart to heart

🕑 Added 2023-10-29 21:13:59 +0000 UTC

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uneron

A bit late, but personally I really liked the twist at the end. It seems fitting to Rosa's deep sense of guilt and throws a wrench into Scarletts plans for a change, making for an engaging story

Cypha

Wait what just happened there at the end? Did Rosa really just go dip shit crazy? Just why? This makes no sense at all.

Hpez

I might be remembering wrong, but wasn't there a concern about travelers going missing because of this village? Rosa even saw the vilewyrm, she should be able to guess what the villages plans were for it. I can understand she's emotional and broken but this choice does feel bizarre.

Hpez

It really rankles that she pulls this for the tribe of sin of all things

Swinter

I'm going to echo most everyone else here. This decision came... So far out of the left-field that it's not even funny. The next few chapters have to work hard to make the end of this one seem valid or justified. Others have already stated the reasons for Why, so I don't need to add anything more to that. I just hope that it's actually Rosa doing something clever. And not just her deciding to suddenly sacrifice everything for... I guess the modern equivalent would be a village full of ISIS fanatic religious terrorists? She may have been powerless vs the Vile before. But to have her very first act of defiance be to... Trust and follow the Vile she's been powerless towards is just... Weird. Regardless of how damaged she is. OK, so I did have to add more it seems. Oh well :P.

V

I was interpreting that as referencing Fynn.

Tin

This chapter certainly had many reactions from myself and I see here other readers. My first thought is “it makes little sense” of Rosa’s decision, but there is some play in the words, so I might not be as “out of character” as we think. I believe Rosa does understand the impact the Vile can have to the entire continent and keeping this in mind. My conjecture is her word-play is to fool Anguish to do what she wants and I think there is going to be a certain amount of self-harm to Rosa herself hence the early apology. Like many here, I am very concerned this wonderful story might “jump the shark”…

Tin

Does anyone know who the “half-blood” is? Maybe it might be helpful to add who looks/smirks at? “I did anticipate more resistance from the half-blood”

stublstm

She is not siding with Anguish. She is trying to do something she could not do all her life. Why do you think she was a bard that travels, and never stay in one place. Because she already tried that. And it ended in a village of dead people. "Have we ever at any point seen Rosa put "innocent" lives ahead of her own well-being?" = Yes, every fucking day of her life. She is still a human. She wants to live. She doesn't want to kill herself. As fucked up her life is, she still wants to live. But all the blood on her hands, weights down on her mind. Ofc, she will do something stupid, first time she gets some agency(power). Because Rosa was not the logical smart character. She is a emotional wreck.

stublstm

what? you want Rosa to die? why? what? whhhat?(confused).

stublstm

You want justification? Think you are Rosa, every fucking day of your life is full of scenes from Hellraiser movie. Because of you a village of people, suffered a dreadful death. All her banter with Scarlett was just façade of her fucked up emotional state. It's the first time in her life, where she feels that she has the power to do SOMETHING. As a fucked up person as Rosa, do you think she will think rationally? "Yes, yes, I am Spock". Of course not, she will do stupid irrational emotionally charged decisions, first time she got powers. She has a trauma where people die because of her. Now, when she has powers she tris to atone for her inability to do something. That's why she decide to act that way. Now lets see where the story will go. I don't think anybody will die. But I think Flamerunner has a very interesting premise, lets see if they can make the landing. I hated the rogue "misunderstanding" trope, but they landed it by killing the rouge, I still don't like it, but I like the story. Or I just misunderstand the story, and I am all wrong. I hope I'm not such a bad reader.

stublstm

Calm down and stop being so antagonistic and think... why she wants save lives of some vile evil villagers, maybe because she is sick of having her hands soaked with blood from her curse? She is written as a human being with flaws and emotions. (not a " intelligent person like Rosa" like you written in your comment... wtf dude she is not smart and logical, she is emotionally strong, but damaged) With a Big fuken trauma? Because of her, a village of people are dead. And if you read this chap you will see that Rosa got powers. Its the first time in her life when she can act... not as a puppet, or as a bystander person, to endure all the suffering caused by her mere existence. She can do something. And she is written as a character that wants to live. If you think... the correct solution is to kill yourself, if you are in her shoes, you are a fucken incarnation destruction in this world, but you want to live! you will be a little fucked up, and impulsive, first time you get agency. I know why you can hate this development of the story, it makes you annoyed and mad, lets see if Flamerunner can land the end. Just give it a bit of grace. Tell you the truth, I felt the same way when he invoked the trope of "misunderstanding" with the rogue. But in the end, by using it, Flamerunner showed how fucking ruthless and "evil" Scarlett really is.

TheMartinalfa

LoL. The heck. I excpected like all scenarios. Fighting some spectral aungish, shit hitting fan and need to kill Rosa, maybe some stupid intervention from church or that priest, even interupting the circle. But what the fuck is this ? Like first of all this is like bonafide bullshit because that village is full of tribal fanatics. Just that alone is enough to serve inteligent person like Rosa as reason. Second is literal whate fuck ? Scarlett never ever acted against her people. Oposite all time. She literaly sufered to get Rosa where she is because of that oath. Third why the fuck in all that exist would she belive in Vile literal seconds or minutes before freedom. Literaly existence that tortured her for years. Fourth what the hell is she imagining will happen ? Like she will left untouched 4 ppl (three of them literal companions basicaly family) miraculously save bunch of fanatics and then what ? Like whate fuck after that ? Fifth shit is how this isnt even selfish or selfless. This is total bullshit that doesnt make even split of sense. Her literal legit choices were be relativly free OR release vile free. From which ass did she pulled out this stupid situation was even viable ? I like this story a lot. My favourite novels are Shadow Slave, Ghost in the Cyberpunk and here small time villaines. I have hard time deciding which i love most. But bruh. I can understand need for some "plotboom" some drama. But this is like complete nonsense. After that incarnation of moon godness Rosa was like my favourite character with Mc also. This was the worst decision making of my favourite charaters i have ever seen. Of course not always charaters go as we wish. But this ? Too much.

M0och

I hate to be so critical, but this was not well justified. One: these are not innocents, they are tribe of sin, and while yes they might not all be "sinners" it is still very odd for Rosa to go out to save them. Two: as someone else has already stated, the tribe members are portalling out, and will likely succeed in this before the duke's men succeed in breaking in. And Scarlet knows this and could easily have said so. Three: why would Rosa listen to Anguish of all people rather than trust Scarlet to explain things more fully, it just isn't consistent with her actions to this point. I don't mind this direction, and this is your story which you are free to do with as you like. I just wish it was done for a more justified reason.

aust117

"You know that tribe sowing chaos and killing innocent people, yeah I'm gonna screw up this whole ritual for them" ??? not really sure I understand Rosa's decision.

Faiir

This really makes it sound like she's doing it to spite Scarlett. I understand it makes for more drama but it feels like it doesn't fit Rosa's previous behavior

Mai0e

What is she going to do? Kill the soldiers to help out the tribe of sin 😂 what a stupid decision

chumponimys

Have we ever at any point seen Rosa put "innocent" lives ahead of her own well-being? To the opposite, we've seen her being selfish and bugging Scarlett in her study if it means a respite from Anguish. I'm not against this outcome in the story, but it just feels so unrealistic for Rosa to side with the entity that has been torturing her for years (her whole life?) when she knows it has the intent to kill as many as possible (and has in the past when given control!!!). Especially when doing so involves going directly against Scarlett's orders

K A N O

Oh man… I hope this isn’t what plays out that would be such a weird twist. Plus more than likely someone’s going to die either Rosa, alyssa or fynn. I doubt a relationship would form off of that.

K A N O

Well…. It was a good run but hopefully Rosa dies after this.

Riaren

Scarlett giving up her most useful relic was quite a shocker. With so many sacrifices on her behalf, no wonder Rosa snapped. That being said, yes, I was hoping for Rosa to go against Scarlett's plan if there is to be a hope for romance between the two of them. Things are too unequal as they are, so their relationship needed a major shakedown. Looking forward to the climax of the arc; these cliffhangers are brutal.

Riaren

> Malachi had regained control. *Anguish > “It was not due to actions that the duke’s men went there,” she eventually said. *my (?) actions

twentytoo

Oof, another companion complication because of scarlet negative trait...

Gwalmeich

Well, this is exciting.

Jo

I agree for the most part. The thing I think is even stranger is that Scarlett doesn‘t tell her that the villagers are preparing to portal out.

Lazy Minx

I understand that things can’t always go Scarlet’s way. I understand that there will always be complications. I do not understand Rosa doing this. At all. It makes absolutely no sense even from the perspective that she cares for the villagers. Why would she stop trusting Scarlet now? Why would Anguish save them? This was all very well written as per usual it just doesn’t hit because it feels like Rosa just became a completely different, dumber person.


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